Unit8 书面表达12篇
一、材料作文
1.丰富多彩的(colorful)校园生活给我们带来了很多乐趣,假设你是John,请根据下列图表信息及要求,写一篇关于你这一学期的学校活动(activity)的短文.
School Activities Art Festival: cool (11.1)
School Trip: fun (9.23)
Sports Day: relaxing (10.10~10.15)
Christmas Party: interesting;favorite activity(12.25)
要求:
(1)短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
(2)词数不少于60,开头已给出,不计入总词数.
I have many activities this term. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
I have many activities this term. On September 23rd, we have a school trip in the afternoon. I love it because it’s great fun. October is a great month. Sports Day is from the 10th to the 15th. It’s relaxing. Your parents can come to our school. Next month, we have an art festival. It’s on November 1st. It’s very cool. Our Christmas Party is on November 25th. All the students think it’s interesting. It’s also my favorite activity. This is a really busy term.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已部分给出,考生应注意不要遗漏图表信息和要求,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按时间顺序介绍学校旅行、运动会、艺术节和圣诞派对;
第二步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be great fun有趣的
②relaxing令人放松的
[高分句型]
①I love it because it’s great fun.我喜欢因为它很有趣。(because引导原因状语从句)
②All the students think it’s interesting.(think认为,后跟宾语从句)
2.假设下面是你们学校本学期的活动安排,一位记者来采访,他想了解你们的活动安排,请你介绍一下。词数60左右。
Activities(活动) Time(时间)
English party September 15th
school trip October 12th
School Day November 20th
basketball game December 3rd
参考词汇:interesting and fun,have a school trip,busy term
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【答案】范文:
We have some interesting and fun things this term in our school. On September 15th we have an English party. On October 12th, we have a school trip. And we have a School Day. It’s on November 20th. We like to play basketball. We have a basketball game. It’s on December 3rd. This is a really busy term.
【总体分析】①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生要注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步,表明写作意图。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述活动内容以及时间安排。
第三步,书写结语。表示本学期的工作比较繁忙。
【亮点词汇】①have a school trip进行一次学校旅行
②busy term忙碌的学期
【高分句型】We have some interesting and fun things this term in our school.(and并列句)
3.假设你叫Mary,下面是你们学校这学期的活动安排表,请根据表格内容写一篇短文,介绍你们学校的活动。
要求:不少于60词。
School trip September 3rd
Basketball games October 5th
Art festival November 18th
English party December 20th
写作模板
介绍活动安排 开篇点题 We have many interesting things to do in our school this term.
分条陈述 ·On September 3rd→a school trip ·On October 5th→basketball games ·On November 18th→the art festival ·On December 20th→an English party
总结收尾 This is a really busy and fun term. Have a good time.
满分作文
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【答案】例文
We have many interesting things to do in our school this term.
On September 3rd, we have a school trip. It’s interesting. On October 5th, we have basketball games. I can’t play basketball, but I like to watch basketball games. The art festival is on November 18th. It’s fun. And we have an English party on December 20th.
This is a really busy and fun term. Have a good time.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应遵循所给的写作模板。用“三层陈述”法对学校活动进行介绍。第一层:开篇点题(第1段);第二层:分条介绍活动安排(第2段);第三层:总结收尾(第3段)。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述;时态采用一般现在时;根据表达需要适当发挥,使文章内容更加充实、完整;语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使行文连贯、自然。
4.假如你是Jeff,12岁了。下面是你们学校十月份的活动安排表。请根据表中内容,写一篇短文,向大家介绍一下你们学校十月份的活动安排。不少于60词。
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【答案】范文:
Hello, I am Jeff. I am 12 years old. October is a great month. We have some interesting and fun things this month.
On October 16th, we have a school trip. We will be very happy during the trip. On October 18th, we have a basketball game. If you like sports, you can take part in it. We have an art festival on October 22nd. You can show your talent here. On October 25th, we have an English party. We also have English Day on October 27th, and the English teacher will teach us how to learn English well.
This is a really busy month. Have fun and enjoy our activities.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据表中内容,写一篇作文介绍你们学校十月份的活动安排。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主;人称以第一人称为主。可运用“三层陈述”法对学校活动进行介绍。第一层:开篇点题(第1段);第二层:分条介绍活动安排(第2段);第三层:总结收尾(第3段)。行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
5.请你写一篇自我介绍,包括以下几个方面:姓名、性别、年龄、生日、爱好等,可以自由发挥,50词左右。
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【答案】例文
My name is Bob. I’m an English boy. I’m twelve years old now and July 3rd is my birthday. I like playing basketball. I’m in the school basketball club and I can play very well. My favorite foods are eggs and tomatoes. They’re nice. I eat them every day. I like Chinese very much.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文主要是从姓名、性别、年龄、生日、爱好等几个方面介绍自己,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。文章主要根据题干中的提到的几个方面进行介绍,写作时保证语言的准确性,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6.假如你叫Linda,今年12岁,生日在6月10号。爸爸是一名医生,生日在9月1号。妈妈是一名工人,生日在11月23日。你还有一个弟弟,生日在10月1日。多么幸福的一家!根据以上内容,写一篇小短文介绍你和你的家人的生日。
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【答案】例文
My name is Linda. I am twelve years old. My birthday is on June 10th. I have a happy family. My father is a doctor. His birthday is on September first. My mother is a worker. Her birthday is on November 23rd. I have a little brother and his birthday is on October 1st. It’s National Day.
I love my family.
【详解】1、题干解读:题目要求你根据所给提示,写一篇短文介绍你和你家人的生日,包括你父母、你和弟弟的生日以及父母的职业等,可适当发挥。
2、写作指导:本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;介绍自己和家人生日时,应详细具体,语句通顺,逻辑性强,保证条理清晰。
7.根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇40词左右的英语短文介绍你的朋友Tom。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Name Tom
Date of birth September 8th
Age 13
Phone number 595-96811
Favorite colors blue and white
Favorite food hamburgers, eggs and chicken
Favorite sport soccer
I have a friend. His name is Tom. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
I have a friend. His name is Tom. He is 13. His birthday is on September 8th. Every year, he invites me to his birthday party. His phone number is 595-96811. His favorite colors are blue and white. He likes hamburgers, eggs and chicken very much. He likes playing soccer. It is relaxing for him. Do you want to make friends with him
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作,在写作时应承接短文开头,根据表格中提示的内容介绍朋友Tom的年龄、出生日期、电话号码以及喜欢的颜色、食物和运动等。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容,时态采用一般现在时,在介绍内容时,力求语句通顺,内容完整,保证条理清晰,行文连贯。
8.美国一所中学与你校结成了友谊学校。为增进彼此之间的了解,请你根据下面提供的校历安排表写一篇40词左右的英语短文,介绍一下你们学校3月份的活动。
March
3 22 29
Reading 8:30 a. m. —10:30 p. m. Book Sale colorful books good prices Sports Day soccer, basketball
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【答案】参考范文:
March is a busy month with so many interesting things in our school.
Everyone in our school wants to be a good reader. We can enjoy reading from 8:30 a m. to 10:30 p. m. on March 3rd. The book sale is on March 22nd. There we can get colorful books at very good prices. On March 29th, students are excited because it is Sports Day. Soccer and basketball are our favorite sports.
In our school, we can not only have a lot of fun but also make new friends. We really learn a lot from each other.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己学校3月份的活动。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段介绍学校3月份的活动;最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
9.介绍一下你最好的朋友的喜好。
要求:
1. 一日三餐的喜好
2. 平日喜欢的运动
3. 喜欢的科目
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【答案】例文:
My best friend
My best friend is Tom. He is 14 years old. He always eats lots of healthy food. He has eggs and bread for breakfast. For lunch, he likes to eat rice and vegetables. As for supper, he has fruit and hamburgers. He also likes playing volleyball and tennis, so he is very healthy. His favorite subject is Chinese. He speaks Chinese very well. We all like him.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据汉语提示的内容,介绍朋友的一日三餐的爱好、平日喜欢的运动以及喜欢的科目。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容,时态采用一般现在时。在介绍内容时,力求语言精炼,语法正确,保持内容全面,条理清晰。
10.假设你是李红,请根据下面的提示向大家介绍一下你自己、你的父母以及学校的活动。
提示:1)How old are you 2)When is your birthday 3)How old are your parents 4)When are your parents' birthdays 5)What activities do you have this term
要求:灵活运用本单元所学知识,60词左右,可适当发挥。
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【答案】参考范文:
Hello! I’m Li Hong. I’m 13. My birthday is on January 6th. My mother is 40 and my father is 41. My mother’s birthday is on May 5th and my father’s birthday is on June 25th. We have a basketball game and an art festival this term. The basketball game is on October 10th. The art festival is on December 20th.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时结合题目中给出的提示问题,进行作答写作,第一层次介绍自己;第二层次介绍父母;第三层次叙述自己的学校活动。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般现在时为主,结合题目问题提示,介绍自己、父母以及学校的活动。需要叙述完整,保证条理清晰。
11.李华,英文名叫Tony,是第一中学一年级二班的学生。他出生于1989年8月20日。他的出生地在广东深圳。他今年16岁,爱好音乐和篮球。他最喜欢英语和爱玩电脑游戏。他经常放学后与同学打篮球。
写短文介绍,开头已给出。
I have a good penfriend. Let me tell you something about him.……
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【答案】
I have a good penfriend. Let me tell you something about him. His name is Li Hua. He has an English name. It is Tony. He is a middle school student in Class Two, Grade One of No.1 Middle School. He is 16 years old now. He was born in Shenzhen, Guangdong. His birthday is August the twentieth. He likes playing basketball and listening to music. He often plays basketball with his classmates after school. His favorite subject is English and he likes playing computer games best. I like to write to him. He is my good friend.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据题干中所给的信息来介绍李华的基本情况。可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称来介绍,时态主要用一般现在时。文章开头已给出,注意上下文衔接自然;写作中主要以简单句为主,可适当运用亮点词汇或短语使文章增添色彩;保证要点齐全,语句通顺,逻辑合理,无单词或语法上错误。
二、书信作文
12.假如你是Tom,你校将于“体育节”(十月二十号)当天下午三点举办一场足球比赛。你的朋友Jack很喜欢足球运动,你想邀请他来观看足球比赛。但是当你去找他时,他正好不在家。请你给他写一封信,邀请他观看足球比赛。
要求:60词左右,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实的校名及地名。
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jack,
Sports Day in my school is on October 20th. We have a soccer game in our school on that day. It is at three in the afternoon. I know you like soccer. I want to ask you to watch the soccer game with me. I’m sure we can have a good time. Please come to my school and watch the soccer game then. See you there.
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:本文主要是邀请朋友来观看足球比赛,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己学校的“体育节”;
第二步,邀请对方来观看足球比赛;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a soccer game举办足球赛
②have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I’m sure we can have a good time.(省略that的宾语从句)
②Please come to my school and watch the soccer game then.(祈使句)
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