08:【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年九年级下学期英语专题
周周练(第一期)(江苏无锡)
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、话题作文
1.温暖可以是朋友间深情的问候、可以是亲人间无私的关爱、还可以是陌生人给予的关爱和帮助。请以“The warmth of ________”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
提示:生活中,总会有一些意想不到的温暖,让人瞬间感动。
要求:
(1)请先将题目补全后,再作答;
(2)语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
(3)文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
The warmth of ________
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二、电子邮件
2.假设你是无锡市第五中学的张颖,你的英国笔友珍妮想了解中国学生课外阅读的情况。请根据下图提示,给她回一封电子邮件。
注意事项:
1. 回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,并展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
2. 所给斜体字提示为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在100个左右,回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 回复的邮件中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ying
三、书信作文
3.假如你叫梁华,是无锡阳光中学的学生,进入九年级后感到学习压力很大,想找 youth worker 倾诉烦恼、寻求帮助。请根据以下社区提供的两名候选人信息,选择其一并用英文写一封求助信。
Mrs. Friend Personality: Patient & kind Hobbies: Writing Specialty: Listening & comforting Available Time(可用时间): 6:00 p.m. – 8:00 p.m. from Monday to Friday Mr. Light Personality: Active & humorous Hobbies: Playing basketball Specialty: Color therapy Available Time: 9:00 a.m. – 5:00 p.m. at the weekend
注意事项:
1. 求助信须陈述选择该工作人员的原因,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数在100个左右;
3. 求助信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
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4.假设你是一名中学生,名叫田梅。学校 “Colour Therapy” 心理社团正在招收志愿者,你想给社团负责老师写一封英文自荐信,内容提示见下表:
基本信息 初三(1)班学生,16岁
简单描述个人品质 ……
相关特长和经历 ……
注意事项:
1. 自荐信除了包括所给内容要点,还需表明写作的意图和应征的目的;
2. 自荐信须根据要求自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
3. 词数在100个左右,短文首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数。
Dear sir or madam:I am Tian Mei from Class 1, Grade 9. I am sixteen years old._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tian Mei
5.假如你是Millie,你要写一封推荐信给班主任Mr. Wang,告诉他你想推荐Sandy做你们班的班长。请根据下列信息,写完这封信。
姓名 Sandy
性格 聪明:能将所有的事情做好。 勤奋:总为班级做额外的工作。 有条理:从不忘记自己需要做的事。 自信:从不害怕在众人面前演讲。
爱好 喜爱阅读:因为可以从书中学到许多。 喜爱黄色:因为黄色……。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 根据要点适当发挥2到3句,注意句意连贯。
Dear Mr. Wang, I’m writing to recommend Sandy to be our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position. Sandy is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
四、材料作文
6.疫情之下,越来越多的人选择云游。有的同学喜欢线上云游,有的同学则喜欢线下旅游。21世纪英文报对在校学生进行 “online tour” 的调查问卷。请你根据调查问卷和你的实际情况,写一篇英语短文投稿。
Questionnaire1. Do you like online tour or not Put a tick (√) or a cross (×) in the box. □ONLINE TOUR 2. What do you think of it ________________________________________________________ 3. Why do you like/dislike it (at least three points)_______________________________________ 4. What’s your travel plan for this summer _____________________________________________
注意事项:
1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数100左右,作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。Online Tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.作为一个青春期的学生,常常有很多烦恼,假如你是李华,为庆祝每年3月20日的世界幸福日“International Day of Happiness”,你分享自己保持快乐的某个经历,让同学们认识保持快乐状态的重要性。请你根据下列流程图完成一篇英语短文贴在班级英语角。
注意事项:
1.短文须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.括号中提供的信息为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3.词数在100 个左右,短文开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
参考词汇:快乐的状态 a happy state of mind
Everything seems to be out of control sometimes, but what we can control is our state of mind.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.人生如旅,在你的成长过程中,许多人影响着你,比如父母、老师、朋友、公众人物或者身边的普通人。最近,你校正开展以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的英语征文活动,请你根据以下提示完成征文。
注意:
1.必须包含表中所有提示内容,并作适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
4.100 词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.假设你是李华,你所在的阳光小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动,请根据所给图表的内容,给社区中心写一封英文推荐信,向他们推荐你的家庭。
注意事项:
1. 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。
One possible version:
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
10.人生,总在选择中不断前行!选择读你喜欢的书,选择做你喜欢的事,选择交你喜欢的朋友……在日常生活中,选择在所难免。如何在遵从内心感受的同时做出客观、理性的选择呢?某英文网站正在开展以“学会选择”为主题的征文活动。请结合图片信息,从提示中选择一个角度,描述你做过的一个选择,并陈述理由及收获。
After-school activities Friends Books
develop hobbies looks novel
do some sports qualities history
attend the extra class interests science fiction
…… …… biography
注意事项:
1. 词数100个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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11.为增强安全意识,学校英语俱乐部将开展“How to protect ourselves”的讨论,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容,仅供参考。
How to protect ourselves At school get along with our classmates;…
In public never run after each other;…
On the Internet protect our personal information;…
… …
注意事项:
1. 短文须自拟,要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数在100个左右,短文标题、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
12.近年来,我们的生活里涌现了许多可歌可泣的英雄,你心中的英雄是谁呢?是耀眼的明星,是见义勇为的市民,是恪守职责的公民,还是身边默默无闻的普通人?假如你是李华,你校将开展以“The Hero in My Heart”为主题的征文活动。请你结合下列思维导图写一篇征文投稿,词数80 左右。
要求:
★ 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
★ 短文必须包括上述要点,可适当发挥;意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
★请勿在文中使用真实的姓名(除名人外)、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
The Hero in My Heart
Recently, many heroes like Zhong Nanshan, Li Guimei have appeared around us. Who is the hero in my heart ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
1.例文:
The warmth of my teacher
I am a junior high school student and today I want to say “thank you” to my teacher. Why Because he gave me a lot of warmth in my life.
When I entered a new school, it was easy for me to get nervous and I didn’t dare to talk with my new classmates. In class, I never put up my hand after the teacher asked a question because I thought if I answered it incorrectly, my classmates would laugh at me. Because of this, my studies got worse and worse.
One day, my English teacher asked me to go to his office. I was very frightened because I thought he would blame me. But he didn’t. Instead, he held my hands in his gently and smiled, “Just do what you want to do, be a brave boy!” His words made me confident. After that, I studied harder and then got good grades. I think he is the best teacher in my life, thanks for the warmth that you gave me, my English teacher.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇半命题作文。要求以“The warmth of ________”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文,时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段和第三段详细介绍经历和感受,并表达情感。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
2.例文
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. In fact, most students in our school haven’t realized the importance of extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time devoted to reading is limited. Some students prefer comic books to classic reading materials. Here are the reasons. Some students haven’t formed a good habit of reading. Others have so little interest in reading that they would rather spend time on videos or computer games. Some people have no time or interest. Reading is good for both our life and study, which can open up a new world to us. So it is necessary for students to take up reading. Since last year, I have read many world classics, such as a Dream of Red Mansions. I have learned a lot about Chinese history.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ying
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和现在完成时”;
③提示:注意回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。根据所给内容要点,给英国笔友珍妮回一封电子邮件,介绍一下中国学生课外阅读的情况。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。首先点明主题;其次介绍中国学生课外阅读的现状;接着介绍学生不喜欢阅读的原因;接下来介绍阅读的好处;最后介绍我的阅读经历。
第三步:书写结语。表示祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①would like想要
②the importance of……的重要性
③prefer…to…比起……来,更喜欢……
④would rather宁愿;宁可
⑤open up打开
[高分句型]
①Others have so little interest in reading that they would rather spend time on videos or computer games.(so…that…引导结果状语从句,表示“如此……以至于……”)
②Reading is good for both our life and study, which can open up a new world to us.(which引导的定语从句)
③So it is necessary for students to take up reading.(It is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.”意为“对某人来说做某事怎么样”)
3.例文
Dear Mr. Light,
I am Liang Hua, and I am a Grade 9 student. After entering Grade 9, I feel very stressed. I think a youth worker will be of great help to me.
I used to play basketball for thirty minutes every night, but now I am busy with my schoolwork on weekdays. Moreover, my parents are strict with me and care too much about my exams, so that makes me blue.
You are active, humorous, and good at playing basketball. I think you may have the same experience during your schooldays. What interests me most is that you can use colour therapy to change moods.
Besides, you are free from 9 o’clock a.m. to 5 o’clock p.m. at weekends. How about 9 o’clock a.m. this Saturday I am free during that time. I am looking forward to your valuable suggestions.
Best wishes,
Liang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”
③提示:本文要求根据社区提供的两名候选人信息,选择其一并用英文写一封求助信。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍,表明身份并表达写信目的。
第二步,表达自己的压力。
第三步,陈述选择该工作人员的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①Moreover此外
②be strict with对……严格
[高分句型]
①What interests me most is that you can use colour therapy to change moods.(表语从句)
②Moreover, my parents are strict with me and care too much about my exams, so that makes me blue.(结果状语从句)
4.例文:
Dear sir or madam:
I am Tian Mei from Class 1, Grade 9. I am sixteen years old. I’d like to be a volunteer in your club.
I’m hard-working and helpful. I don’t mind doing extra work. I know colours very well. Colours can influence our everyday lives in many ways. Once my classmate Jim couldn’t sleep well at night. I advised him to paint his bedroom blue. Blue is a calm colour. It can bring peace to our mind and body. He followed my advice and slept better than before.
I’ll be glad if I can be a volunteer. I hope I can learn more about colour therapy.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tian Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文,为自荐信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据表格内容提示,向社团写一封自荐信,注意要包含所给要点,语句通顺,意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,简单介绍自己的基本信息以及写信的目的;
第二步,从个人品质以及相关经历方面介绍自己;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己希望成为该社团的志愿者。
[亮点词汇]
①advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
②hard-working勤奋努力的
③mind doing sth介意做某事
[高分句型]
①I’ll be glad if I can be a volunteer.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope I can learn more about colour therapy.(hope后跟宾语从句)
5.例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m writing to recommend Sandy to be our monitor. I think she has many strong qualities for this position.
Sandy is clever. She can do all the things well. She is hard-working, and always does extra work for our class. Sandy is organized. She never forgets the things she needs to do. She is confident and is never afraid of making a speech in front of many people. Sandy likes reading because she can learn a lot from books. She loves yellow. She thinks yellow is the colour of wisdom. It can cheer us up when we hope for success.
I hope that you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据表格中内容,来说明为什么推荐Sandy作为班长。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明自己要推荐Sandy作为班长。
第二步,具体阐述推荐Sandy作为班长的理由;
第三步,总结,希望得到认可。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid of doing害怕做某事
②make a speech做演讲
③cheer sb. up使某人振作起来
④agree with sb,同意某人
[高分句型]
①I think she has many strong qualities for this position.(“I think”后是宾语从句)
②Sandy likes reading because she can learn a lot from books.(“because”引导的原因状语从句)
6.例文:
Like:
Online tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. I also prefer this new way of travelling. Taking an online tour is popular and easy now.
There are several advantages of travelling from home. First, the Internet is everywhere and people can be connected to it easily. Then, there are different kinds of materials online, like videos, documentaries, live programmes. Moreover, taking an online tour is money-saving. In this way, travelling abroad costs us a little.
In my opinion, online tour offers me a chance to see different places of interest and opens up a new world to me. This summer I plan to take an online tour of the whole world. (103 words)
Dislike:
Online tour
Recently, more and more people choose online tour. Although online tour is common and popular now, it is not my cup of tea.
First of all, it is important to watch and feel things around us when travelling. We can pick up some local languages, taste local food and feel special cultures there, which online tours cannot give us. Also, making a plan is an important part of the tour, such as where to live, what to eat and when to go. This can improve our ability of planning things well.
This summer I plan to travel to Yunnan with my parents. I want to learn more about the culture there. (103 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“What’s your travel plan for this summer”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山说明自己是否喜欢线上旅游;
第二步,具体阐述喜欢或不喜欢的理由;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受和旅游打算。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②In this way以这种方式
③In my opinion依我之见
④First of all首先
[高分句型]
①We can pick up some local languages, taste local food and feel special cultures there, which online tours cannot give us. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Also, making a plan is an important part of the tour, such as where to live, what to eat and when to go. (动名词作主语)
7.例文
Everything seems to be out of control sometimes, but what we can control is our state of mind. Having a happy mind is very important. As the saying goes, “Cheerfulness is health. Having a light heart is better than taking good medicine to relieve pain and sufferings”. I believe that it is important to keep a good mind as much as possible in our lives.
I have a lot of friendly neighbors, and we got along very well. We used to have a very small garden, and now developed into a dump. The environment has gone bad. So I became a volunteer. I organized some volunteers to work with my neighbors to make our environment better. We planted many saplings together. I also taught people to wrap up their non wooden buckets and paper towels as garbage cans. Our environment is good, many of the community residents also joined the team. I felt very proud for myself! Being a volunteer makes me more confident. I have many friends. I also get very high grades. I realize that happiness is not just a feeling all the time. It is an action.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容介绍保持快乐状态的重要性。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出“保持一个好的心态是很重要的”观点;
第二步,分享自己保持快乐的某个经历。
[亮点词汇]
①as much as possible尽可能
②wrap up包起来
③get very high grades取得非常高的分数
④all the time一直
[高分句型]
①Everything seems to be out of control sometimes, but what we can control is our state of mind.(what引导的主语从句)
②I believe that it is important to keep a good mind as much as possible in our lives.(that引导的宾语从句)
8.例文:
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Miss. Lin, my English teacher. She is about thirty years old. She is tall and slim. You will not find anything unusual about her until you know more about her.
She is kind and helpful. She is ready to help anyone. Whenever I have problems with my study, she will give a helping hand to me. She once advised me to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies when I felt stressed. Moreover, she has worked as a youth worker in a community center since COVID-19 broke out.
Now, I realize she has a heart full of love.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”为主,综合运用各种时态;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示内容,并作适当发挥,注意不要遗忘了“对所介绍人物的评价”。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍人物的基本信息,从“姓名、职业、外形”等方面介绍;
第二步,具体阐述人物的品性,从“个性,做过的事”等方面详细阐述;
第三步,对所介绍的人物进行简单评价。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to准备
②advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
③ achieve a balance达到平衡
[高分句型]
①Whenever I have problems with my study, she will give a helping hand to me. (whenever引导的时间状语从句)
②You will not find anything unusual about her until you know more about her. (not... until结构)
9.例文
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year.
In my family, we respect each other and everyone enjoys equal rights. We often communicate with our family members to encourage and support each other.
In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When someone has problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.
It is important for us to live a green life. We have a balanced diet to keep healthy. Besides, we usually ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars. We try our best to protect the environment.
What’s more, my family members like doing volunteer work. We often take an active part in charity work to help people in need.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于材料作文,根据所给图表的内容写一封推荐信,推荐自己的家庭参加“模范家庭”的评选,要适当进行发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文用第一人称进行写作,时态用一般现在时;正文内容主要从家庭成员、邻里关系、绿色生活和志愿者活动等方面详细说明了参加评选的理由。检查时注意是否遗漏要点,语言表达是否符合英文习惯。
10.例文
There is no denying that it is important for us to make a reasonable choice in life. I like doing some sports. I am a volleyball fan so I choose to join the school volleyball club, which is beneficial to my growth.
In my childhood, I fell in love with volleyball. Then when I was in Grade 8, I was eager to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to focus time and energy on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard with persistence in the club and learned what the true meaning of the teamwork was. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got a satisfying result in the test. All this showed that my choice was right.
Needless to say, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart.
Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,描述自己做过的一个选择,并陈述理由及收获,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
11.One possible version:
How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves.
First of all, it’s necessary for us to get along well with our classmates. Never forget your teachers. Ask them for help while meeting any danger at school. Second, not doing something dangerous in public is also important. Remember not to run after or crowd with each other, especially not push past others. Third, be careful to make friends online. Don’t give any personal information to others. Never meet e-friends alone. Let your parents go with you if you have to. Last but not least, we must follow the traffic rules outside and don’t carry too much money with us.
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇提纲类作文,以“How to protect ourselves”为题参照表格中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括表格中所有要点,并适当拓展。
2.写作指导:本文以第一、二人称为主,时态为一般现在时;写作时注意分段叙述,第一段开门见山,引入话题;第二段介绍如何从三个方面保护自己,可以多采用祈使句句式;第三段原文已给出;保证文章条理清晰,语句通顺。
12.参考范文:
The Hero in My Heart
Recently, many heroes like Zhong Nanshan, Li Guimei have appeared around us. Who is the hero in my heart She is my mother whose name is Zhangli. She is a nice doctor with long hair, a pretty face and slim body. Now she has become my hero because she helps me a lot and sets a good example for me. As my mother, she always listens to me patiently, encourages me deeply and gives me helpful suggestions when I am in trouble. With the help of her, I always succeed in solving problems. As a doctor, she works hard, tries her best to help patients and wins their high praise. In a word, she is successful both at work and family.
I hope I will be a person like her. I also hope she will care for her own health.
【详解】题干解读:本题是一篇材料作文,结合思维导图提示,谈谈自己心目中的英雄,具体包括他/她的姓名、职业、外貌以及为什么他/她会成为你心目中的英雄,你在他/她身上学到了什么精神。
写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时,人称用第三人称。写作时可分为两段,第一段承接开头,点出心目中的英雄是谁,然后结合思维导图,全方面地描写;第二段写向他/她学习,成为像他/她那样的人。注意人称和时态正确运用,造句符合英语语言表达习惯,无拼写和语法错误。
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