卷子答案网-一个不只有答案的网站备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（应用文·咨询信）
一、书面表达
1．（2023高三上·丰台期末）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信，询问你如何提高学习效率。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的具体做法及原因。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Jim,
……
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How are you doing with your studies Knowing that you are interested in how 1 learn efficiently, I'm writing to share my strategies with you.
Before I start studying, I often plan out my day and break down my tasks into smaller, more manageable parts. That helps me stay on track and organized. To avoid getting distracted when studying, I usually put my phone out of sight until I'm done with homework. And of course, I make sure to do some exercise and get enough sleep every day, as they help to keep me sharp-minded and energetic.
I hope this could be of some help to you. Feel free to let me know your thoughts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份写一封回信，介绍你的具体做法及原因。写作背景：你的英国朋友Jim来信，询问你如何提高学习效率。 本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Knowing that you are interested in how I learn efficiently, I'm writing to share my strategies with you.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；Before I start studying, I often plan out my day and break down my tasks into smaller, more manageable parts. 运用了时间状语从句；To avoid getting distracted when studying, I usually put my phone out of sight until I'm done with homework.运用了时间状语从句的省略，时间状语从句； And of course, I make sure to do some exercise and get enough sleep every day, as they help to keep me sharp-minded and energetic.运用了原因状语从句；I hope this could be of some help to you. 运用了宾语从句。
2．（2022高三上·高台开学考）假定你是李华，你最近发现一些同学经常在微信朋友圈分享详细的生活细节照片，你觉得这样的行为很危险，请你就如何安全地使用网络社交软件发一篇博客。写作要点如下:
1）不在网络上透露个人信息；
2）使用较安全的密码，不使用公共电脑登录；
3）不要添加陌生人。
注意:
1）词数100词左右。
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:微信朋友圈 WeChat Moments；密码:password
【答案】例文：
How to Stay Safe on Social Networking Apps
Recently, some people like to share details of their lives on WeChat Moments. I think it will cause some safety problems. Today I’m going to discuss a question on my blog — how do you stay safe on social networking apps Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, protect your privacy. Don’t give out too much private information, such as your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers and so on. Besides, use secure passwords and don’t use public computers. By doing this, it will keep your account and personal information safe. Last but not least, don’t add strangers to the list of your friends, because they may bring some troubles to you.
Do you have some advice for staying safe on social networking apps Post your comments below!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份 就如何安全地使用网络社交软件发一篇博客。写作背景： 你最近发现一些同学经常在微信朋友圈分享详细的生活细节照片，你觉得这样的行为很危险 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）不在网络上透露个人信息；2）使用较安全的密码，不使用公共电脑登录；3）不要添加陌生人。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I think it will cause some safety problems.运用了宾语从句； Here are some suggestions for you.运用了倒装句；Don't give out too much private information, such as your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers and so on.运用了祈使句； Besides, use secure passwords and don't use public computers. 运用了祈使句，并列句；Last but not least, don't add strangers to the list of your friends, because they may bring some troubles to you.运用了祈使句，原因状语从句。
3．（2022高二下·长治期末）假如你叫李华，即将进入高三，最近收到美国笔友Paul的来信，询问你新学期的打算，你的回信内容可包括：
1）对高三生活既兴奋又紧张；
2）因英语成绩不好，希望得到老师和他的支持。
注意：1）词数为100左右；2）可适当加入细节使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Paul,
Thank you for your letter. I'm very pleased to hear from you.
It's going to be my senior year in high school pretty soon. I'm very excited about it, hoping it will be an enjoyable experience though challenging. Anyway, I'm worrying about my English. I'm kind of left behind by my classmates and, to be honest with you, my English score is quite low in exams. I plan to work on it and study harder in the coming year, hoping I'd be able to catch up with others before the University Entrance Exam. And I need my teacher's help and your support. Hope that's not much to ask.
So much for my situation here. What about you Anything new I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 回信 。写作背景：你 即将进入高三，最近收到美国笔友Paul的来信，询问你新学期的打算 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）对高三生活既兴奋又紧张；2）因英语成绩不好，希望得到老师和他的支持。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I'm very pleased to hear from you.运用了不定式作原因状语；I'm very excited about it, hoping it will be an enjoyable experience though challenging.运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句；I'm kind of left behind by my classmates and, to be honest with you, my English score is quite low in exams. 运用了并列句；I plan to work on it and study harder in the coming year, hoping I'd be able to catch up with others before the University Entrance Exam. 运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句；Hope that's not much to ask.运用了宾语从句。
4．（2023高三下·重庆开学考）卡塔尔(Qatar)世界杯赛刚刚落幕，无处不在的中国元素成了人们津津乐道的话题。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Mike 对此非常感兴趣，写信给你想要了解近 10 年中国的发展变化，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
1）写信目的；
2）简介中国近 10 年的发展变化；
3）你对这些变化的感受。
注意：
1）词数 80 词左右
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3）开头结尾已给，不计入词数
Dear Mike,
The Qatar World Cup is over.
I hope that you can come to China for a visit
to experience more.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】【范文】Dear Mike,
The Qatar World Cup is over. I, as well as you, am amazed by the Chinese elements almost everywhere in the World Cup. Knowing that you are interested in the great changes in our country over the past decade, I'm glad to share some with you.
Actually, remarkable achievements have been made in our economy, life, science, and so forth. For example, the goal of poverty elimination has been achieved, thus paving the way for the accomplishment of common prosperity.
As a high school student, I'm proud of these achievements, which enhance my national confidence and motivate me to study harder.
I hope that you can come to China for a visit to experience more.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写一封回信 。写作背景： 卡塔尔(Qatar)世界杯赛刚刚落幕，无处不在的中国元素成了人们津津乐道的话题。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Mike 对此非常感兴趣，写信给你想要了解近 10 年中国的发展变化 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）写信目的；2）简介中国近 10 年的发展变化；3）你对这些变化的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I, as well as you, am amazed by the Chinese elements almost everywhere in the World Cup. 运用了主谓一致；Knowing that you are interested in the great changes in our country over the past decade, I'm glad to share some with you.运用了现在分词作原因状语，宾语从句；Actually, remarkable achievements have been made in our economy, life, science, and so forth. 运用了被动语态；
As a high school student, I'm proud of these achievements, which enhance my national confidence and motivate me to study harder.运用了非限制性定语从句；I hope that you can come to China for a visit to experience more.运用了宾语从句。
5．（2022高二下·昆明月考）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Fred来信询问你最近一次参加志愿者活动的经历，请你给他回信，内容包括：
1）活动时间及地点；
2）活动内容；
3）你的感受。
注意：
1）词数100左右；2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Fred,
Glad to hear from you and I'd love to share my most recent experience as a volunteer with you.
Last Sunday, our class paid a visit to the elderly in a local nursing home. Upon arriving, we began to work in groups straight away. Some of us helped clean up the yard and rooms, and others chatted with the old there. After that, we gave them some performances, which made them laugh heartily. Seeing the smiles on their faces, I also felt happy that I could do something meaningful for them.
Have you done any voluntary work recently Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份回信。写作背景：你的英国笔友Fred来信询问你最近一次参加志愿者活动的经历 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动时间及地点；2）活动内容；3）你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Glad to hear from you and I'd love to share my most recent experience as a volunteer with you.运用了并列句；Some of us helped clean up the yard and rooms, and others chatted with the old there.运用了并列句； After that, we gave them some performances, which made them laugh heartily. 运用了非限制性定语从句；Seeing the smiles on their faces, I also felt happy that I could do something meaningful for them.运用了名词性从句。
6．（2022高三上·高县月考）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David来信想了解你校刚举行过的运动会情况，请你用英语给他写封回信，要点包括：
1）时间及项目；
2）师生参与情况；
3）你的感受。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear
David,
I'm really glad to
hear from you.
……
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I'm really glad to hear from you. I'm very happy to know that you take great interest in the autumn sports meeting in our school.
The sports meeting was held in our school before National Day, aimed at to enrich the students' school life. There were various kinds of events for us to choose, which include running, long-jumping and basketball. Most importantly, all students and teachers have the access to the game, as long as you are in healthy condition.
As is known to us all, doing sports does so great benefits to our health that we should keep exercising every day. Sports game is a good opportunity to show ourselves.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写封回信。写作背景：你的英国笔友David来信想了解你校刚举行过的运动会情况 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）时间及项目；2）师生参与情况；3）你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm really glad to hear from you. 运用了不定式作原因状语；I'm very happy to know that you take great interest in the autumn sports meeting in our school.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；The sports meeting was held in our school before National Day, aimed at to enrich the students' school life.运用了被动语态，过去分词作状语； There were various kinds of events for us to choose, which include running, long-jumping and basketball.运用了there be句式，非限制性定语从句； Most importantly, all students and teachers have the access to the game, as long as you are in healthy condition.运用了条件状语从句；As is known to us all, doing sports does so great benefits to our health that we should keep exercising every day. 运用了非限制性定语从句，结果状语从句。
备考2023年高考英语二轮专题：书面表达（应用文·咨询信）
一、书面表达
1．（2023高三上·丰台期末）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信，询问你如何提高学习效率。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的具体做法及原因。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Jim,
……
Yours,
Li
Hua
2．（2022高三上·高台开学考）假定你是李华，你最近发现一些同学经常在微信朋友圈分享详细的生活细节照片，你觉得这样的行为很危险，请你就如何安全地使用网络社交软件发一篇博客。写作要点如下:
1）不在网络上透露个人信息；
2）使用较安全的密码，不使用公共电脑登录；
3）不要添加陌生人。
注意:
1）词数100词左右。
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:微信朋友圈 WeChat Moments；密码:password
3．（2022高二下·长治期末）假如你叫李华，即将进入高三，最近收到美国笔友Paul的来信，询问你新学期的打算，你的回信内容可包括：
1）对高三生活既兴奋又紧张；
2）因英语成绩不好，希望得到老师和他的支持。
注意：1）词数为100左右；2）可适当加入细节使行文连贯。
4．（2023高三下·重庆开学考）卡塔尔(Qatar)世界杯赛刚刚落幕，无处不在的中国元素成了人们津津乐道的话题。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Mike 对此非常感兴趣，写信给你想要了解近 10 年中国的发展变化，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
1）写信目的；
2）简介中国近 10 年的发展变化；
3）你对这些变化的感受。
注意：
1）词数 80 词左右
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3）开头结尾已给，不计入词数
Dear Mike,
The Qatar World Cup is over.
I hope that you can come to China for a visit
to experience more.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2022高二下·昆明月考）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Fred来信询问你最近一次参加志愿者活动的经历，请你给他回信，内容包括：
1）活动时间及地点；
2）活动内容；
3）你的感受。
注意：
1）词数100左右；2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
6．（2022高三上·高县月考）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David来信想了解你校刚举行过的运动会情况，请你用英语给他写封回信，要点包括：
1）时间及项目；
2）师生参与情况；
3）你的感受。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear
David,
I'm really glad to
hear from you.
……
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li
Hua
答案解析部分
1．【答案】Dear Jim,
How are you doing with your studies Knowing that you are interested in how 1 learn efficiently, I'm writing to share my strategies with you.
Before I start studying, I often plan out my day and break down my tasks into smaller, more manageable parts. That helps me stay on track and organized. To avoid getting distracted when studying, I usually put my phone out of sight until I'm done with homework. And of course, I make sure to do some exercise and get enough sleep every day, as they help to keep me sharp-minded and energetic.
I hope this could be of some help to you. Feel free to let me know your thoughts.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份写一封回信，介绍你的具体做法及原因。写作背景：你的英国朋友Jim来信，询问你如何提高学习效率。 本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Knowing that you are interested in how I learn efficiently, I'm writing to share my strategies with you.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；Before I start studying, I often plan out my day and break down my tasks into smaller, more manageable parts. 运用了时间状语从句；To avoid getting distracted when studying, I usually put my phone out of sight until I'm done with homework.运用了时间状语从句的省略，时间状语从句； And of course, I make sure to do some exercise and get enough sleep every day, as they help to keep me sharp-minded and energetic.运用了原因状语从句；I hope this could be of some help to you. 运用了宾语从句。
2．【答案】例文：
How to Stay Safe on Social Networking Apps
Recently, some people like to share details of their lives on WeChat Moments. I think it will cause some safety problems. Today I’m going to discuss a question on my blog — how do you stay safe on social networking apps Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, protect your privacy. Don’t give out too much private information, such as your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers and so on. Besides, use secure passwords and don’t use public computers. By doing this, it will keep your account and personal information safe. Last but not least, don’t add strangers to the list of your friends, because they may bring some troubles to you.
Do you have some advice for staying safe on social networking apps Post your comments below!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份 就如何安全地使用网络社交软件发一篇博客。写作背景： 你最近发现一些同学经常在微信朋友圈分享详细的生活细节照片，你觉得这样的行为很危险 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）不在网络上透露个人信息；2）使用较安全的密码，不使用公共电脑登录；3）不要添加陌生人。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I think it will cause some safety problems.运用了宾语从句； Here are some suggestions for you.运用了倒装句；Don't give out too much private information, such as your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers and so on.运用了祈使句； Besides, use secure passwords and don't use public computers. 运用了祈使句，并列句；Last but not least, don't add strangers to the list of your friends, because they may bring some troubles to you.运用了祈使句，原因状语从句。
3．【答案】Dear Paul,
Thank you for your letter. I'm very pleased to hear from you.
It's going to be my senior year in high school pretty soon. I'm very excited about it, hoping it will be an enjoyable experience though challenging. Anyway, I'm worrying about my English. I'm kind of left behind by my classmates and, to be honest with you, my English score is quite low in exams. I plan to work on it and study harder in the coming year, hoping I'd be able to catch up with others before the University Entrance Exam. And I need my teacher's help and your support. Hope that's not much to ask.
So much for my situation here. What about you Anything new I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 回信 。写作背景：你 即将进入高三，最近收到美国笔友Paul的来信，询问你新学期的打算 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）对高三生活既兴奋又紧张；2）因英语成绩不好，希望得到老师和他的支持。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I'm very pleased to hear from you.运用了不定式作原因状语；I'm very excited about it, hoping it will be an enjoyable experience though challenging.运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句；I'm kind of left behind by my classmates and, to be honest with you, my English score is quite low in exams. 运用了并列句；I plan to work on it and study harder in the coming year, hoping I'd be able to catch up with others before the University Entrance Exam. 运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句；Hope that's not much to ask.运用了宾语从句。
4．【答案】【范文】Dear Mike,
The Qatar World Cup is over. I, as well as you, am amazed by the Chinese elements almost everywhere in the World Cup. Knowing that you are interested in the great changes in our country over the past decade, I'm glad to share some with you.
Actually, remarkable achievements have been made in our economy, life, science, and so forth. For example, the goal of poverty elimination has been achieved, thus paving the way for the accomplishment of common prosperity.
As a high school student, I'm proud of these achievements, which enhance my national confidence and motivate me to study harder.
I hope that you can come to China for a visit to experience more.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写一封回信 。写作背景： 卡塔尔(Qatar)世界杯赛刚刚落幕，无处不在的中国元素成了人们津津乐道的话题。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Mike 对此非常感兴趣，写信给你想要了解近 10 年中国的发展变化 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）写信目的；2）简介中国近 10 年的发展变化；3）你对这些变化的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I, as well as you, am amazed by the Chinese elements almost everywhere in the World Cup. 运用了主谓一致；Knowing that you are interested in the great changes in our country over the past decade, I'm glad to share some with you.运用了现在分词作原因状语，宾语从句；Actually, remarkable achievements have been made in our economy, life, science, and so forth. 运用了被动语态；
As a high school student, I'm proud of these achievements, which enhance my national confidence and motivate me to study harder.运用了非限制性定语从句；I hope that you can come to China for a visit to experience more.运用了宾语从句。
5．【答案】Dear Fred,
Glad to hear from you and I'd love to share my most recent experience as a volunteer with you.
Last Sunday, our class paid a visit to the elderly in a local nursing home. Upon arriving, we began to work in groups straight away. Some of us helped clean up the yard and rooms, and others chatted with the old there. After that, we gave them some performances, which made them laugh heartily. Seeing the smiles on their faces, I also felt happy that I could do something meaningful for them.
Have you done any voluntary work recently Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份回信。写作背景：你的英国笔友Fred来信询问你最近一次参加志愿者活动的经历 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动时间及地点；2）活动内容；3）你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Glad to hear from you and I'd love to share my most recent experience as a volunteer with you.运用了并列句；Some of us helped clean up the yard and rooms, and others chatted with the old there.运用了并列句； After that, we gave them some performances, which made them laugh heartily. 运用了非限制性定语从句；Seeing the smiles on their faces, I also felt happy that I could do something meaningful for them.运用了名词性从句。
6．【答案】Dear David,
I'm really glad to hear from you. I'm very happy to know that you take great interest in the autumn sports meeting in our school.
The sports meeting was held in our school before National Day, aimed at to enrich the students' school life. There were various kinds of events for us to choose, which include running, long-jumping and basketball. Most importantly, all students and teachers have the access to the game, as long as you are in healthy condition.
As is known to us all, doing sports does so great benefits to our health that we should keep exercising every day. Sports game is a good opportunity to show ourselves.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写封回信。写作背景：你的英国笔友David来信想了解你校刚举行过的运动会情况 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）时间及项目；2）师生参与情况；3）你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm really glad to hear from you. 运用了不定式作原因状语；I'm very happy to know that you take great interest in the autumn sports meeting in our school.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；The sports meeting was held in our school before National Day, aimed at to enrich the students' school life.运用了被动语态，过去分词作状语； There were various kinds of events for us to choose, which include running, long-jumping and basketball.运用了there be句式，非限制性定语从句； Most importantly, all students and teachers have the access to the game, as long as you are in healthy condition.运用了条件状语从句；As is known to us all, doing sports does so great benefits to our health that we should keep exercising every day. 运用了非限制性定语从句，结果状语从句。