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专题09 书面表达（解析版）
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电子邮件
76．眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
近视原因 长时间使用电子产品； 读书时间过长。
建议 控制使用电子产品时间； 养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操） ……
希望 ……
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 myopia；电子产品 electronic device
Dear Mike,
How is it going with you
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Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Dear Mike,
How is it going with you I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight. And reading books for too long may cause myopia.
But don’t worry. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight. At first, you should control the time you spend on electronic products. You can do more outdoor activities. What’s more, you should develop some good habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. They are good for your health. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes. Lastly, you should have your eyes examined every term to make sure your eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；
第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②be good for对……有好处
③play an important role in在……中起重要作用
[高分句型]
①I think you may use electronic products for a long time, which is bad for your eyesight.(which引导的定语从句)
②doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing your tired eyes.(动名词作主语)
本溪，辽阳，葫芦岛、铁岭
小作文
86．学校将举办九年级学生毕业典礼（graduation ceremony）。请你以班长刘丽的名义，向各位家长发出邀请。请家长和孩子于7月7日上午9点准时到达学校操场，参加典礼并观看表演。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。词数：30词左右。
Dear parents,
Our school will hold a graduation ceremony for the students in Grade Nine. ______________________________
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Liu Li
【答案】例文：
Dear parents,
Our school will hold a graduation ceremony for the students in Grade Nine. It will be held on the school playground at 9:00 am on July 7th. Could you please come with your children on time You will take part in the ceremony and watch the shows together.
Liu Li
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为小作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，确保语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，根据提示向各位家长发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①come with和……一起来
②on time准时
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
It will be held on the school playground at 9:00 am on July 7th.（一般将来时的被动语态）
十三、电子邮件
87．同学们，我们的班级将开启一次愉快的毕业之旅，每名同学都可以参与这次旅行的策划。假如你是王海，请用英文给班主任吴老师写一封电子邮件，从旅行地点、所带物品及师生活动等方面，谈谈你的想法。词数：80～100词。
要求：（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中包括所提示内容，可适当发挥，但不得出现真实姓名和校名。
（3）邮件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms. Wu,
I’m happy to hear that our class is going to take a graduation trip.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Hai
【答案】例文：
Dear Ms. Wu,
I’m happy to hear that our class is going to take a graduation trip. It must be very relaxing and fun. I hope to climb Pingding Mountain. It’s our favorite place and we can have fun there. It’s a good idea to take some food and drinks to have a picnic. We can also put up a tent and cook outside. We can even take the mobile phones to take some photos. As for the activities, let’s play some guessing games, sing songs, dance and so on. We can also have a climbing race. The winner will get some prizes. I’m sure we will have a great time!
Yours,
Wang Hai
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，具体从旅行地点、所带物品及师生活动等方面谈谈自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①have fun玩得开心
②have a picnic去野餐
③put up搭建
④have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It’s a good idea to take some food and drinks to have a picnic.（it固定句型）
②We can even take the mobile phones to take some photos. （动词不定式作目的状语）
朝阳
材料作文
74．劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》，从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际，以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
(1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么？
(2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处？
(3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能？
要求：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。
(2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。
(3) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么；
第二步，介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处；
第三步，介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②on weekends在周末
③take good care of照顾好
④In the future在未来
[高分句型]
①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
大连
材料作文
70．生活中，我们往往会因为某件事而感到烦恼，但是如果我们用积极、正向的态度去面对，可能不但问题迎刃而解，而且我们还会从中懂得做人做事的道理。假如你是李华，班级即将举行以“Do not worry. Be happy!”为主题的英语班会，请你用英语写一篇短文，结合具体事例与同学们分享你在这方面的体会。
内容提示：
（1）What made you unhappy
（2）How did it help you grow as a person
要求：
（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
（3）词数80左右。
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【答案】例文：
In our lives, we sometimes become upset and worried about something. However, if we face the problems with a positive attitude, not only can we find solutions to our problems, but we can also learn valuable lessons about life.
I remember the day when I failed a math test. I was sad and felt disappointed in myself. However, instead of crying over my mistakes, I decided to change the situation with a positive attitude. I analyzed my weak areas and asked help from my teacher and classmates. With their guidance and support, I had a better understanding of the subject and achieved better results in the following tests.
This experience helped me grow as a person. It made me realize that every failure is a chance for personal improvement, and that a positive attitude can lead to better results and pleasure.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Do not worry. Be happy!”为主题，结合提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对下文的介绍；
第二步，介绍什么让自己不开心；
第三步，介绍它如何帮助你成长为一个人。
[亮点词汇]
①felt disappointed in对……感到失望
②instead of而不是
③had a better understanding of有了更好的理解
[高分句型]
①However, if we face the problems with a positive attitude, not only can we find solutions to our problems, but we can also learn valuable lessons about life.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②It made me realize that every failure is a chance for personal improvement, and that a positive attitude can lead to better results and pleasure.（that引导的宾语从句）
丹东
小作文
94．我们学校篮球队队员刻苦训练，通力合作，在市比赛中取得了好成绩。希望全校学生向他们学习。请根据该信息，代表学校学生会写一封表扬信。文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名：词数：30词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Praise
Dear students,
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The spirit of their teamwork should be praised.
Student Union
【答案】例文
Praise
Dear students,
Our school basketball team won a good result in the city competition. Congratulations! Because of their hard work, they can achieve such excellent results. We should learn from them. I hope they will keep going and get better results.
The spirit of their teamwork should be praised.
Student Union
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍篮球队取得的成绩；
第二步，介绍需要向他们学习的地方以及表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②learn from从……中学习
[高分句型]
①I hope they will keep going and get better results.（宾语从句）
②The spirit of their teamwork should be praised.（含有情态动词的被动语态）
十三、话题作文
95．保持善良，传播爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历，以“The Spread of Love”为题，讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历，并谈谈你的感悟及今后的打算。
写作要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数：70词左右。
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【答案】例文
The Spread of Love
Everyone has different ideas about life. In my opinion, life is beautiful and full of love.
Several weeks ago, my classmate Bob was badly ill. He had to be in hospital for a long time. But his family was too poor to afford it. So I decided to raise money to help him. When I sent all the money to Bob, he and his parents were deeply moved.
Helping others makes me happy. Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky, but we should believe that life is beautiful and love will be around us forever. And I will also help more people in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍生活充满爱；
第二步，具体阐述你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历；
第三步，最后表达自己的感悟及今后的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②too...to...太……而不能……
③decide to do决定做
[高分句型]
①When I sent all the money to Bob, he and his parents were deeply moved.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky, but we should believe that life is beautiful and love will be around us forever.（that引导的宾语从句）
抚顺
书信作文
86．假如你是学生会主席田颖，请你给本校优秀毕业生杨洋写一封邀请函。请她于本周日下午一点回学校，在礼堂与大家分享一下高中 (senior high school) 生活。短文结尾已给出，不计入总词数。词数：30词左右。
Dear Yang Yang,
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Tian Ying
【答案】例文：
Dear Yang Yang,
How is it going Are you busy recently There will be an activity in our school hall at 1:00 p.m. this Sunday. And we want you to share the life at senior high school as the outstanding graduate. We’ll really appreciate it if you can come.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Tian Ying
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封邀请函；
② 时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③ 提示：作文重点要围绕“邀请杨洋回校分享其高中生活”来进行，要求用语得当，行文有逻辑；
[写作步骤]
第一步，正文以简单的问候开始，引出想要邀请杨洋回校分享其高中生活的想法；
第二步，表达“非常希望杨洋能答应邀请”的期望；
第三步，书写结语，表示期待收到对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①outstanding graduate 优秀毕业生
②appreciate 感激，感谢
[高分句型]
①There will be an activity in our school hall at 1:00 p.m. this Sunday.（There be句型）
②We’ll really appreciate it if you can come.（if引导条件状语从句）
十三、话题作文
87．初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~100词。
要求：
（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
（3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school,
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Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
【答案】例文
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school, I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well. However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness. I felt at home. At the end of that first school day, I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school.
Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及标题已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，描述你入校当天的感受；
第二步，结合自身经历，描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发毕业感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as也，又，和
②fit in适应
③feel at home感觉自在
[高分句型]
①I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
③Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness.（现在分词短语作状语）
阜新
材料作文
77．根据要求完成作文。
“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”阅读不仅能让我们获得知识，而且能开阔我们的眼界。在科技发达的时代，人们有多种多样的阅读方式，比如看纸质书、报纸和杂志，在线阅读或者使用app听书等。你最喜欢哪一种阅读方式呢？请以“My favorite way of reading”为题写一篇英文短文。
提示词语：e-book, environment, convenient, download, search for information
提示问题：
1. What’s the importance of reading
2. What’s your favorite way of reading
3. Why do you choose this way (至少写出2点理由)
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名，词数在60—80词左右。
My favorite way of reading
Today, reading has become an important part of everyday life.
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【答案】例文
My favorite way of reading
Today, reading has become an important part of everyday life. As people’s living standard is improving constantly, reading has won the hearts of most people. The more books we read, the wiser we’ll become. There are many kinds of reading ways, such as newspapers, magazines, e-books, etc.
Compared with reading e-books, reading paper books is my favorite. Firstly, reading in the libraries and taking away books back home are simple and everyone can do it. Secondly, paper books do less harm to our eyes if we use the proper positions. I feel relaxed after looking through some interesting comic books and storybooks. Thirdly, paper books can be reused over and over again if they are kept well. Moreover, we can take down some useful notes and make learning marks while reading easily.
As the saying goes that “reading is the education in a classroom that has no walls”. Let’s start to read a meaningful book.
例文
My favorite way of reading
Today, reading has become an important part of everyday life. Reading not only provides us with endless knowledge, but also makes us understand what’s going on around the world. With the rapid development of modern technology, our reading ways have changed a lot. There are many kinds of reading ways, such as newspapers, magazines, e-books, etc.
I like reading e-books best. First, we can easily download new books from the Internet. It is much easier and quicker to search for the messages we want to read. And we can also write notes or mark some important information in an e-book. Moreover, a number of e-books can be stored in a small machine, which is easy to take. Last but not least, e-books save a lot of paper and are good for the environment.
In short, no matter which way you choose, I hope you can feel the joy of reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读书的重要性；
第二步，介绍你最喜欢的阅读方式；
第三步，介绍为什么选择这种方式。
[亮点词汇]
①take down 记下
②do harm to对……有害
③the 比较级, the 比较级 越……，越……
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of reading ways, such as newspapers, magazines, e-books, etc.（There be句型）
② Let’s start to read a meaningful book.（祈使句）
锦州
材料作文
71．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇。
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为40-50词；
2. 必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分至少一段，第一段开头语已经为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。
At present, there are plenty of after-class activities in schools. Some students don’t want to take part in them because they think it’s a waste of time. Also, they worry that they are too shy to communicate with other students.
Paragraph 1:
But other students disagree with them on that. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
But other students disagree with them on that. They think by taking part in after-class activities in schools, they can not only enrich their spare time, but also improve their life skills. For example, they can learn to look after themselves by learning to clean, cook and so on. So they think they should take part in after-class activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇作文续写；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求承接首句，介绍学生对课外活动的看法，对适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首句表达本段观点；
第二步，介绍一些学生认为课外活动对其有益的原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②For example例如
③look after照顾
④and so on等等
[高分句型]
①They think by taking part in after-class activities in school, they can not only enrich their spare time, but also improve their life skills.（not only…but also…结构）
②So they think they should take part in after-class activities.（省略that的宾语从句）
72．俗话说“众人拾柴火焰高”，团队合作（teamwork）是成功的关键。近日，学校正在开展以“Many Hands Make Light Work”为题的征文活动。请你根据下面所提示的内容，用英文写一篇短文投稿。（用你生活中的一次经历。例如一次活动，一场比赛等）
The saying “Many hands make light work” Your understanding of the saying
An experience in your life
Your feeling
要求：
1. 不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；
2. 请包含表格内所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥：（参考词汇可以选用：prepare, discuss, overcome, pull together, come up with, try one’s best, play a part）
3.内容完整、思维连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐；
4. 词数：80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Many Hands Make Light Work
Have you heard of the saying “Many hands make light work” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Many Hands Make Light Work
Have you heard of the saying “Many hands make light work” I think it means that when we meet difficulties, we can overcome them successfully only by pulling together.
Last term our school held a tug of war. It was difficult for our class, because the students in our class didn’t look strong enough to win the game. Before the game, the teacher and the students sat together and discussed how to win the game. A student came up with a good idea. He thought that each of us should try our best in the game. In the end, we won the game.
Everyone plays a part in this game. Teamwork is the key to success.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据题干中提示，介绍自己对于“众人拾柴火焰高”的理解、自己的经历及感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先阐述自己对于“众人拾柴火焰高”的理解；
第二步，围绕“团队合作”，介绍自己与之相关的生活经历；
第三步，表达个人感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①pull together齐心协力
②come up with想出
③try one’s best尽某人最大努力
④in the end最终
[高分句型]
①It was difficult for our class, because the students in our class didn’t look strong enough to win the game.（because引导原因状语从句）
②He thought that each of us should try our best in the game.（that引导宾语从句）
盘锦
电子邮件
65．根据要求完成作文，并写在答题卡的相应位置。
假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。
提示：
(1)建议买什么；
(2)介绍这个礼物；
(3)给出推荐理由。
要求：
(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.
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I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. I’d love to give you my suggestion about Chinese gifts.
From my point of view, paper-cut is a good choice to be special Chinese gifts for your family. Paper-cuts are usually used to decorate the house. They are put on windows, doors and walls to celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.
I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍推荐的礼物是什么；
第二步，介绍这个礼物；
第三步，说明推荐理由。
[亮点词汇]
①from my point of view依我看来
②be used to do被用来做某事
③be seen as被看成
[高分句型]
①Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.（because引导的原因状语从句）
沈阳
材料作文
65．为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝亲敬长”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇征文参加比赛。内容包括：
1.尊重的对象和原因；
2.具体做法；
3.发出号召。
【注意】
1.词数 80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
We are supposed to show respect for our parents because they are the most trusted elders and help us solve problems when we are in trouble.
Here are some things we can do to show our respect. First, we can offer to help with housework such as leaning the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work. Second, don’t make them angry and try to take their advice when we disagree with each other. Third, share your happiness and sorrow with them as they were once like you and have more experience than you expect.
Small actions can make a great difference. Let’s show respect for our parents from now on!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，介绍敬老是很重要的优良传统；
第二步，介绍应该尊敬父母的原因以及如何表现自己的尊敬；
第三步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②such as例如
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
①First, we can offer to help with housework such as leaning the dishes or sweeping the floor so that they can have a rest after a day’s work.（so that引导目的状语从句）
②Third, share your happiness and sorrow with them as they were once like you and have more experience than you expect.（as引导原因状语从句）
营口
小作文
101．你校“英语园地”计划更新环保宣传栏内容，开展“我为学校环保献计策”活动，请你提出合理的环保建议。
写作要求：
（1）30词左右；（2）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；（3）文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
As students, it’s our duty to protect the environment. First, we should plant more trees and flowers around us. Second, we must protect the water resource. Third, we shouldn’t throw litter around.
I hope our world will become more and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：小作文要求简短有条理，给学校的活动提出合理的环保建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出保护环境的话题；
第二步，分条给出合理的建议；
第三步，表达自己的期许。
[亮点词汇]
①protect 保护
②throw litter around 随处扔垃圾
[高分句型]
①As students, it’s our duty to protect the environment.（it固定句式）
②I hope our world will become more and more beautiful.（省略that的宾语从句；比较级 and 比较级）
十四、讲稿
102．假设你是李华，你所在城市将举办以“My Country，My Pride”为主题的中学生英语演讲比赛。请你写篇演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境、文化传播以及太空科技方面的发展与变化（至少阐述以上两个方面），并谈谈你的感受。
写作要求：
（1）包含所给要点，80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
（3）文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
My Country, My Pride
Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
My Country, My Pride
Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.
Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality.
I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国这些年在环境，文化传播以及太空科技方面的发展与变化；
第二步，以自己的国家为傲，希望在未来能成为国家的骄傲。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②for example例如
③at the same time同时
④be proud of以……为傲
[高分句型]
①For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures.（since引导时间状语从句）
②I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.（宾语从句）
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鞍山
电子邮件
76．眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。
要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。
（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。
（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。
（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
近视原因 长时间使用电子产品； 读书时间过长。
建议 控制使用电子产品时间； 养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操） ……
希望 ……
参考词汇：视力 eyesight；近视 myopia；电子产品 electronic device
Dear Mike,
How is it going with you
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
本溪，辽阳，葫芦岛、铁岭
小作文
86．学校将举办九年级学生毕业典礼（graduation ceremony）。请你以班长刘丽的名义，向各位家长发出邀请。请家长和孩子于7月7日上午9点准时到达学校操场，参加典礼并观看表演。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。词数：30词左右。
Dear parents,
Our school will hold a graduation ceremony for the students in Grade Nine. ______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________
Liu Li
十三、电子邮件
87．同学们，我们的班级将开启一次愉快的毕业之旅，每名同学都可以参与这次旅行的策划。假如你是王海，请用英文给班主任吴老师写一封电子邮件，从旅行地点、所带物品及师生活动等方面，谈谈你的想法。词数：80～100词。
要求：（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中包括所提示内容，可适当发挥，但不得出现真实姓名和校名。
（3）邮件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms. Wu,
I’m happy to hear that our class is going to take a graduation trip.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Hai
朝阳
材料作文
74．劳动(Labor)能够使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部发布了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》，从2022年秋季开始劳动课正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。在你的生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、种花、植树、喂养动物甚至田间劳作等。请你结合自身实际，以“Labor makes me a better person”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
(1) 你所擅长的一项劳动技能是什么？
(2) 这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处？
(3) 你还打算学习其他什么劳动技能？
要求：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名。
(2) 语言通顺、意思连贯、书写工整。
(3) 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Labor makes me a better person
As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
大连
材料作文
70．生活中，我们往往会因为某件事而感到烦恼，但是如果我们用积极、正向的态度去面对，可能不但问题迎刃而解，而且我们还会从中懂得做人做事的道理。假如你是李华，班级即将举行以“Do not worry. Be happy!”为主题的英语班会，请你用英语写一篇短文，结合具体事例与同学们分享你在这方面的体会。
内容提示：
（1）What made you unhappy
（2）How did it help you grow as a person
要求：
（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
（3）词数80左右。
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丹东
小作文
94．我们学校篮球队队员刻苦训练，通力合作，在市比赛中取得了好成绩。希望全校学生向他们学习。请根据该信息，代表学校学生会写一封表扬信。文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名：词数：30词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Praise
Dear students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The spirit of their teamwork should be praised.
Student Union
十三、话题作文
95．保持善良，传播爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历，以“The Spread of Love”为题，讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历，并谈谈你的感悟及今后的打算。
写作要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数：70词左右。
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抚顺
书信作文
86．假如你是学生会主席田颖，请你给本校优秀毕业生杨洋写一封邀请函。请她于本周日下午一点回学校，在礼堂与大家分享一下高中 (senior high school) 生活。短文结尾已给出，不计入总词数。词数：30词左右。
Dear Yang Yang,
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Tian Ying
十三、话题作文
87．初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！词数：80~100词。
要求：
（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
（3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school,
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Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
阜新
材料作文
77．根据要求完成作文。
“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”阅读不仅能让我们获得知识，而且能开阔我们的眼界。在科技发达的时代，人们有多种多样的阅读方式，比如看纸质书、报纸和杂志，在线阅读或者使用app听书等。你最喜欢哪一种阅读方式呢？请以“My favorite way of reading”为题写一篇英文短文。
提示词语：e-book, environment, convenient, download, search for information
提示问题：
1. What’s the importance of reading
2. What’s your favorite way of reading
3. Why do you choose this way (至少写出2点理由)
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名，词数在60—80词左右。
My favorite way of reading
Today, reading has become an important part of everyday life.
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锦州
材料作文
71．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的语篇。
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为40-50词；
2. 必须至少使用2个短文中划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分至少一段，第一段开头语已经为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所选用的关键词语。
At present, there are plenty of after-class activities in schools. Some students don’t want to take part in them because they think it’s a waste of time. Also, they worry that they are too shy to communicate with other students.
Paragraph 1:
But other students disagree with them on that. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
72．俗话说“众人拾柴火焰高”，团队合作（teamwork）是成功的关键。近日，学校正在开展以“Many Hands Make Light Work”为题的征文活动。请你根据下面所提示的内容，用英文写一篇短文投稿。（用你生活中的一次经历。例如一次活动，一场比赛等）
The saying “Many hands make light work” Your understanding of the saying
An experience in your life
Your feeling
要求：
1. 不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；
2. 请包含表格内所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥：（参考词汇可以选用：prepare, discuss, overcome, pull together, come up with, try one’s best, play a part）
3.内容完整、思维连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐；
4. 词数：80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Many Hands Make Light Work
Have you heard of the saying “Many hands make light work” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
盘锦
电子邮件
65．根据要求完成作文，并写在答题卡的相应位置。
假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。
提示：
(1)建议买什么；
(2)介绍这个礼物；
(3)给出推荐理由。
要求：
(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.
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I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
沈阳
材料作文
65．为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝亲敬长”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你写一篇征文参加比赛。内容包括：
1.尊重的对象和原因；
2.具体做法；
3.发出号召。
【注意】
1.词数 80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Show respect for elders
Showing respect for elders is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
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营口
小作文
101．你校“英语园地”计划更新环保宣传栏内容，开展“我为学校环保献计策”活动，请你提出合理的环保建议。
写作要求：
（1）30词左右；（2）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；（3）文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
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十四、讲稿
102．假设你是李华，你所在城市将举办以“My Country，My Pride”为主题的中学生英语演讲比赛。请你写篇演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境、文化传播以及太空科技方面的发展与变化（至少阐述以上两个方面），并谈谈你的感受。
写作要求：
（1）包含所给要点，80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
（3）文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
My Country, My Pride
Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
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