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2023-2024学年上学期期末考试九年级上英语专题复习
作文专题：书面表达15篇（人教新目标Go for it!）
期末真题+名校模拟
包含各种类型书面表达，话题匹配九年级全册
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、材料作文
1．
假设你是赵宇，今年作为一名交换生在法国的一所中学学习，你的法国同学们对你的故乡——中国，很感兴趣，尤其是中国的餐桌礼仪，请你以When in China, do as the Chinese do为题，根据表格提示写一篇文章，向你的法国同学们介绍中国的饮食文化，80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
提示如下：
Information about Chinese food culture
How many … 3 meals a day
How to eat with chopsticks, not forks or knives
For breakfast bread, noodles …
For lunch and dinner rice, meat, vegetables …
Table manners 1. when eating with older people …
2. stick the chopsticks into the food
3. use chopsticks to hit an empty bowl.
4. …
When in China, do as the Chinese doMeals in China are different in some ways from the ones in the west. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, the golden rule is: When you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!
2．“低碳生活”代表一种更自然，更健康的生活方式。如今“低碳生活”理念已经深入人心，在校园里，创建“低碳校园”已经成为了广大师生的共同心愿。请你根据以下提示，写一篇以“Lower Carbon, Happier Life”为主题的英语短文。
提示：
（1）List some environmental problems;
（2）What should you do to deal with these problems
（3）…
要求：
（1）短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
We are facing many environmental problems now.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
3．青少年在成长过程中总会遇到各种各样的问题。假设你是林涛，请你用英语给你校学生成长网站编辑Sam写一封信，告诉他你的遇到过问题以及解决这些问题的途径。
写作要点：
1.你遇到的一种或几种问题(可参看上面图示)；
2.你解决这些问题的途径。
要求：
1.短文应围绕所选的问题进行描述，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：for example used to carefully advice/suggestion
Dear Sam,
As teenagers, we often meet problems in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Lin Tao
二、话题作文
4．因为直播，越来越多的外国人了解到了中国的传统文化。假如你是Steve，某直播平台邀请你作为形象大使，请你介绍一种中国的传统文化或者习俗，让世界更加了解中国。
要求：
1. 不得在文中出现学校的真实名称和真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，100词左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends and all the online audiences,
I’m Steve. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．初中三年的学习生活转瞬即逝，在你的初中生活中一定有很多铭记在心的人。有的人给予你支持和帮助：有的人带给你友爱和勇气；有的人教会你成长与坚定。请以“The Person I Want to Thank Most”为主题，谈谈你在初中生活中最想感恩的人，以及你和他/她之间最难忘的一件事。
要求： 1. 80—120词； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点： 1. 最想感恩的人： 2. 你们之间最难忘的一件事 3.……
The Person I Want to Thank Most
As I grow up. I’ve me lota of people who helped me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．时光荏苒，转眼初中生活接近尾声，回想近3年的成长历程，你的身心都发生了这 样那样的改变。某英语网站以“The Greatest Change in My Middle School life”为主题发 起故事分享活动，请讲述你进入初中以来发生的最大变化。
要求：
1.80-120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息：
1. 发生转变的起因(某事、某人、自我认知……);
2. 转变的故事(经过、结果……);
3. ……..
The Greatest Change in My Middle School life
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7．你的英国笔友Jack对中国文化非常感兴趣。请你从风景名胜, 古今名人, 古籍名著和现代科技中选择1-2 个视角写一篇110字左右的英语短文, 让他了解中国之美。
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三、电子邮件
8．假定你是李华，你的笔友David对即将举行的中国画画展很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示用英语写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次画展和志愿者项目，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese painting show. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李明，你是校英语报《成长的烦恼》栏目的编辑，最近你收到九年级读者Sally的一封邮件，她在邮件中讲述了她在新学校的情况。请你给Sally回一封邮件，针对邮件中的问题，提些合理的建议。
Dear Li Ming,I’m a ninth grader. I went to a new school last month. I’m so shy that I don’t have any friends and I’m very lonely now. What’s worse, I’m especially weak in English. And I’m worried about the coming exam. What should I do Can you give me some advice Many thanks!Yours,Sally
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 字数：110词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m sorry to know that _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you have a great time in your new school.
Yours,
Li Ming
四、书信作文
10．“汉语桥”中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友 Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。
中华武术 (Chinese martial arts) 京剧 (Peking Opera) 中华书法 (Chinese calligraphy)
中文歌曲 (Chinese songs) 中华美食 (Chinese food) 中华剪纸 (Chinese paper-cutting)
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11．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Hunter对你不久前参加的“勤劳之美”实践活动很感兴趣，希望了解活动情况。请你结合内容提示给他写一封回信。词数80左右。
When to gather 8:00 am, July 25
Where to gather school gate
How to go by bike
What to do visit the farm, learn planting and cooking, listen to a talk
When to return 4:00 pm
Feelings ...
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Dear Hunter,
I’d like to share with you the interesting activities I joined in the other day. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
12．假如你是李华，你的网友 Mike 要来中国，他写信向你询问有关中国的一些餐桌礼仪。请你给他写一封回信，简单介绍一下中国的餐桌礼仪。要求：字迹工整、语法正确、信息齐全、不少于 5 句话、40 词左右。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
13．假如你是Mike，想邀请你的同学Martin去看电影《阿凡达：水之道》，请根据下面的表格写一封邀请函。
Movie Avatar: The Way Of Water
Ticket 40
Time 5:10 p.m., December 30
Place Wanda Cinema City
要求：内容完整，表达充分，40词左右。
Dear Martin,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Mike
五、日记
14．假如你是正在中国游学的美国学生Amy，你每年都会制定一份新年计划。请根据以下信息，写一篇日记，总结过去一年计划的完成情况，并制定新的一年的计划。
写作要点：
1. 每年你都会对自己许下一些承诺。
2. 介绍去年计划的完成情况：
(1) 变得更加开朗；
(2) 读完了一本名著(classic)；
(3) 学会了做饭。
3. 谈谈你今年的新年计划是什么，以及你打算如何完成每个计划。
写作要求：
(1) 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3) 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
(4) 至少80词。
January 1st Sunday
Today is New Year’s Day.
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六、讲稿
15．青春期的孩子总会感觉很孤独，无人能够理解，有很多成长的烦恼。为了帮助孩子们走出困惑，班级决定组织一次家长开放日，鼓励孩子们说出自己的心里话。假如你是李华，请你根据提示，围绕自己的经历和如何与父母沟通写一篇英文发言稿，在家长开放日发言，谈谈自己成长中的烦恼、改变和收获，同时给其他同学和家长一些建议，呼吁大家直面问题，积极沟通，为美好的明天而努力。
参考要点：
1.经历：孤独、焦虑，不敢向老师、父母诉说和寻求帮助……
2.改变和收获：在老师的帮助下，变得外向，有了朋友，学习成绩变好……
3.建议：父母多理解和陪伴，与同学、老师、父母多交流……
要求：
1.80－120词左右，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My dear parents and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m happy to give a speech here.
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2023-2024学年上学期期末考试九年级上英语专题复习
作文专题：书面表达15篇
写作指导：
1．例文
When in China, do as the Chinese do
Meals in China are different in some ways from the ones in the west.
In China, we have 3 meals a day, breakfast, lunch and dinner. We eat with chopsticks instead of knives and forks. We often eat bread, noodles or porridge for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, we usually eat rice, meat, vegetables or soup. If you plan to visit our country, it’s very important to learn about some of our table manners. First, you are not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table. Second, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food. Third, it’s also impolite to use your chopsticks to hit your empty bowl. Finally, while you are eating, you shouldn’t put your bowl of rice on the table, you are expected to pick up your bowl!
In a word, the golden rule is: When you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格中罗列的要点介绍中国的饮食文化，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题（已给出）；
第二步，具体从一日三餐的食物和餐桌礼仪方面介绍中国的饮食文化；
第三步，总结全文（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是
②eat…for breakfast早餐吃……
③be not supposed to不应该
④stick…into…将……插入……
⑤be expected to do应该做某事
[高分句型]
①If you plan to visit our country, it's very important to learn about some of our table manners. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②Finally, while you are eating, you shouldn’t put your bowl of rice on the table, you are expected to pick up your bowl! (while引导的时间状语从句)
2．例文
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
We are facing many environmental problems now. The environment is becoming worse and worse. There is a lot of rubbish in the river. There is a lot of dust in the air.
It’s our duty to protect the environment. First, we can walk to school and have short trips by bike. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Third, remember to go shopping with cloth bags rather than plastic bags. I believe life will be better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文要点已给出，注意要点衔接顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些环境问题；
第二步，应该做什么来处理这些问题；
第三步，结束语，呼吁一起行动。
[亮点词汇]
①worse and worse越来越差
②by turning off the taps通过关水龙头
[高分句型]
①Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them（时间状语从句）
②I believe life will be better and better if we can do these things.（条件状语从句）
3．One possible version:
Dear Sam,
As teenagers, we often meet problems in our life. For example, I used to stay up late to finish all my homework. My teacher told me to plan my day carefully and make a list of all the homework I had. Now I can work out how much time I need to finish it every day. Time has proved that the advice is worth taking. There is another example. I don’t have enough time for my hobbies like basketball and music. My parents told me to choose my hobbies according to the time I had. Therefore, I will play basketball if I have a lot of time, and I will listen to music if I only have a short time.
As long as we try hard, there are more ways than problems.
Yours,
Lin Tao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可参看上面图示适当补充内容，添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己遇到的问题，表达自己解决这些问题的途径；
第三步，书写结语，表达感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①For example例如
②used to do sth.过去常常做某事
③stay up late 熬夜
④tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人做某事
⑤work out 弄清楚，搞明白
⑥need to do sth.需要做某事
⑦according to根据
⑧as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Now I can work out how much time I need to finish it every day. (宾语从句)
②Time has proved that the advice is worth taking. (that引导的宾语从句)
③My parents told me to choose my hobbies according to the time I had. (定语从句)
④Therefore, I will play basketball if I have a lot of time, and I will listen to music if I only have a short time.(if引导的条件状语从句)
⑤As long as we try hard, there are more ways than problems.(As long as引导的条件状语从句和there be句型)
4．例文：
Dear friends and all the online audiences,
I’m Steve. I’m very glad to tell you something about the Spring Festival, which is a traditional festival in China. It comes in winter. It’s time to get new. We usually clean and decorate our house carefully before it comes. I always help my mother clean the windows and wash the clothes. We put on “Chunlian” on the doors and “Chuanghua” on the windows. It’s time to get together. Everyone goes home to get together with their families, though someone is far away from home. They must have dinner together on that day. They must visit their relatives and friends and say “Happy New Year” to them. When the kids greet their grandparents, they can get lucky money.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍一种中国的传统文化或者习俗。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求作为直播平台的嘉宾，介绍一种中国的传统文化或者习俗。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，简单引入主题，介绍春节；
第二步，描述春节的文化和习俗。
[亮点词汇]
①get together团聚
②lucky money红包
[高分句型]
①I’m very glad to tell you something about the Spring Festival, which is a traditional festival in China.（which引导的定语从句）
②Everyone goes home to get together with their families, though someone is far away from home.（though引导的让步状语从句）
5．例文
The Person I Want to Thank Most
As I grow up, I’ve met lots of people who helped me. Some of them are patient with me, while others are friendly to me. But there is a person that I want to thank most—my English teacher.
We have a lot of things in common, such as listening to songs and watching movies. My English isn’t good but she is always patient with me and cheers me up. One day, I was talking about the pressure of the coming test with her. She told me that I should be relaxed and make plans for my study. In this way can I make progress. She taught me some new ways of learning. I felt much better after talking with her. I followed her advice and did well in that text finally.
I will never forget her help! Thank you, my dear teacher.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作参考要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求先点出主题要感谢的人是谁。
第二步，根据参考要点描述你们之间最难忘的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①be patient with sb. 对某人有耐心
②in common 共同的
③cheer sb. up 给某人加油
[高分句型]
①Some of them are patient with me, while others are friendly to me.（while连接两个并列句）
②But there is a person that I want to thank most—my English teacher.（定语从句）
③She told me that I should be relaxed and make plans for my study. （宾语从句）
④In this way can I make progress. （倒装句）
6．例文：
The Greatest Change in My Middle School life
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of unforgettable memories.
I didn’t finish my homework on time in the past, and I was so lazy in my studies that my academic performance was very poor. But an exam in the third year of junior high school has changed my learning attitude. I realized that if I didn’t study hard, I might not get into high school. My head teacher talked to me and gave me a lot of advice and encouragement, so I started studying seriously. I arrived at school early every day to start reciting and learning. I also spent less time playing games, but more time studying and exercising. After a year of hard work, I finally succeeded in getting into high school.
What I have learnt from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的自我认知，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用“回望过去三年，我有很多难以忘怀的记忆”来引出重点内容；
第二步，具体阐述初中以来发生的最大变化，包括起因，经过和结果等要点；
第三步，书写结语，从该事件中学到了什么道理。
[亮点词汇]
①unforgettable memories 难以忘怀的记忆
②so...that 如此……以至于
③spend time (in) doing sth. 花时间做某事
④succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事
⑤put my heart into it 用心去做
[高分句型]
①I was so lazy in my studies that my academic performance was very poor.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
②What I have learnt from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.（what引导主语从句）
7．例文
Dear Jack,
I am more than pleased to learn that you are coming to China for a visit.
At your request, I am suggesting some historical sites that may interest you. As you know, China is a country with a history of 5,000 years, passing down numerous cultural heritages.The first city that you can’t afford to neglect is Beijing, which is the capital of China. There are many imperial gardens in Beijing, of which the Summer Palace is the most famous, where you will get to know about the life of the ancient emperors.
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture, especially Tang poetry. As you know, Tang poetry is a very important literary from which enjoys great popularity in China. They represent the traditional Chinese culture and are popular all over the world.As the golden age of poems, the Tang Dynasty produced many outstanding poets, among whom Li Bai, Du Fu, and Bai Juyi were the most well-known in history.
I hope you will have a good time in China and I am expecting to see you soon.
Yours,
Daming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③写作提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点明写作意图。欢迎杰克来中国，为下文介绍中国文化做铺垫；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“风景名胜、古籍名著”两方面介绍中国文化之美；
第三步，书写书面结语，再次表达欢迎杰克来中国的美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① At your request 应你的要求；
② cultural heritages文化遗产；
③ enjoys great popularity 受欢迎
[高分句型]
①At your request, I am suggesting some historical sites that may interest you. （that引导的定语从句）
② I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture, especially Tang poetry.（that引导的宾语从句）
8．参考范文：
One possible version:
Dear David,
I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese painting show. Now, I’d like to share with you some information about it. It’s going to be held in Art Gallery in the city center from January 15 to 18, 2023.
As you know, some volunteers are needed on the show. Here are some requirements. First, you are expected to introduce art forms of Chinese paintings. What’s more, it will be better if you are an experienced organizer, so that you can keep the show in order. The most important thing is that you are ready to provide help for visitors anytime. You can visit www.artgallery.com to find more information.
Look forward to meeting you on the show.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写请David关注线上相关信息，适当添加细节，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这次画展举办的时间、地点；
第二步，具体阐述志愿者项目，说明对志愿者的要求；
第三步，表示期待能尽快见到David。
[亮点词汇]
①share分享
②as you know如你所知
③what’s more而且
④experienced有经验的
⑤be ready to do sth.准备做某事
⑥look forward to doing sth.期待做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s going to be held in Art Gallery in the city center from January 15 to 18, 2023.（一般将来时的被动语态）
②What’s more, it will be better if you are an experienced organizer, so that you can keep the show in order.（if引导的条件状语从句，so that引导的目的状语从句）
③The most important thing is that you are ready to provide help for visitors anytime. （that引导的表语从句）
9．例文
Dear Sally,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m sorry to know that you have these problems. You should join more clubs and find some classmates who have the same hobbies to make friends. When others are in trouble, you should also take the initiative to help them. You can make friends that way, too.
As we all know, English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions. Firstly, we should often listen to English songs, the tapes and English programs. It’s also helpful for us to watch English movies. Secondly, we should speak English as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the English club and practice with others. Thirdly, we can read more English magazines and newspapers. It’s good for us. Finally, we should keep diaries and recite some good passages.
Hope you have a great time in your new school.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据邮件中的问题给出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，就交友给出建议；
第二步，就如何学好英语给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be in trouble处于困境中
②As we all know众所周知
③e afraid of害怕
④have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①When others are in trouble, you should also take the initiative to help them. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②You should join more clubs and find some classmates who have the same hobbies to make friends.（who引导的定语从句）
10．Dear Peter,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting.
It has a history of more than 5,000 years. It is easily made. You only need some paper and a pair of scissors. You can change the paper into some different shapes, such as animals, flowers and so on. When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls. It is a symbol of good luck. You can learn how to make Chinese paper-cutting by watching videos.
We also have other traditional culture. If you want to learn more, please tell me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍剪纸是中国传统文化之一；
第二步，介绍剪纸的相关情况，包括它的历史，制作以及代表的意义。
第三步，表示自己希望得到对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②more than多于
③change into把……变成……
④and so on等等
⑤a symbol of……的象征
⑥look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
① I know you are interested in Chinese culture. (省略了that的宾语从句)
②Now let me introduce one of the most important culture—Chinese paper-cutting. (let引导的祈使句)
③When Spring Festival comes, you can see people stick them on the windows and walls. (when引导的时间状语从句)
④ If you want to learn more, please tell me. (if引导的条件状语从句)
11．Dear Hunter ,
I’d like to share with you the interesting activities I joined in the other day.
On July 25, my classmates and I went to the community farm. We gathered at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. Then we went to there by bike. When we arrived, we did something meaningful. We visited farm and worked together with farmers. Some learnt to plant. Some helped to cook. Finally, we listened to a talk. And we returned at 4:00 p.m.
Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learnt to value each grain.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写相关信息，适当添加细节，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写信目的；
第二步，具体阐述活动具体情况，包括活动时间，集合地点，出行方式，活动细节，返程时间；
第三步，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②share sth with sb.与某人分享某事
③join in参加
④gather集合
⑤together with和……一起
⑥help to do sth 帮助做某事
[高分句型]
①When we arrived, we did something meaningful.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learnt to value each grain.（and连接两个并列谓语）
12．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China. Now I want to tell you something about Chinese table manners.
In China the host or hostess won’t eat any dish until the guests and the elders begin. You can’t tap bowls with the chopsticks. It’s impolite to do so. Don’t point at others with chopsticks. You shouldn’t reach across the table to get something to eat. You can’t start to eat until everyone is at the table. Also, you should make a toast to longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess.
I’m looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意围绕中国的餐桌礼仪进行阐述，不得少于5句话，注意适当增加细节，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直切主题，说明要向Mike介绍中国的餐桌礼仪；
第二步，具体阐述中国的餐桌礼仪有哪些；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望能尽快见到Mike的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①Chinese table manners 中国的餐桌礼仪
②not...until 直到……才
③impolite 不礼貌的
④point at 指向
⑤make a toast 举杯祝酒
⑥look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①In China the host or hostess won’t eat any dish until the guests and the elders begin.（not...until引导的时间状语从句）
②You shouldn’t reach across the table to get something to eat.（动词不定式作目的状语）
13．例文：
Dear Martin,
I’m writing to invite you to see Avatar: The Way Of Water with me. It’s a great movie and I believe you will love it. It will be on at 5:10 p.m. on December 30 in Wanda Cinema City. Oh, the ticket is 40 each. Please call me if you agree to see it.
Yours,
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格中的要点内容完成邀请函，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍电影的具体信息；
第三步，书写结语：同意的话联系。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb to do邀请某人做某事
②be on上映
③agree to do同意做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s a great movie and I believe you will love it. (and连接的并列句；believe后是宾语从句)
②Please call me if you agree to see it.(if引导的条件状语从句)
14．例文：
January 1st Sunday
Today is New Year’s Day. At the beginning of each year, I make some promises to myself, which are also my New Year’s plans.
In the past year, I have been more outgoing and have made some good friends. I have finished reading a classic and gained a lot from it. I have learned how to cook, which makes my parents very happy.
In the new year, I hope to manage my time more reasonably and balance my study and rest. Besides, I want to improve my English reading and speaking skills. I will not only watch more English movies and novels, but also take part in English corner activities. I hope my new plans can be completed well.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇日记；
② 时态：主要采用“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，其中“去年计划完成情况”和“今年新计划以及如何完成”需要具体描述；涉及多个时态，灵活运用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己每年你都会对自己许下一些承诺；
第二步，具体描写去年计划的完成情况；
第三步，具体介绍今年的新年计划，以及打算如何完成每个计划。
[亮点词汇]
① make some promises to 许下承诺
② gain a lot from... 从中收获很多
③ balance my study and rest 劳逸结合
④ manage my time more reasonably 更合理地管理我的时间
[高分句型]
① I have learned how to cook, which makes my parents very happy.（定语从句）
② I will not only watch more English movies and novels, but also take part in English corner activities.（“not only...but also”结构）
15．例文
My dear parents and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I’m happy to give a speech here.
In the past, I had few friends and felt lonely. I often feel anxious. I didn’t dare to tell my parents and teachers because I was afraid they worried about me. I didn’t dare to ask them for help. I worried they would laugh at me. Later, I met my teacher, Miss Li. With her help, I have some friends now. I become more outgoing and get better grades.
As students, we should communicate with parents, teachers or classmates when we have problems. Parents should also understand and accompany us more. In addition, we should have confidence. No matter what we do, we shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时、一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意叙述自己过去经历，时态应用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简单介绍自己并准备演讲；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详述自己过去的经历和后来的改变；
第三步，书写结语。表达对父母与孩子之间沟通建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past 在过去
②dare to do sth. 敢于做某事
③laugh at 嘲笑
④communicate with 与……沟通
[高分句型]
①I didn’t dare to tell my parents and teachers because I was afraid they worried about me.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②No matter what we do, we shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes.（“no matter+特殊疑问词”构成复合结构，可引导让步状语从句）
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