卷子答案网-一个不只有答案的网站2024届高考英语读后续写训练3（elf and homework）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Patrick never did homework. “Too boring,” he said. He played football and basketball and tennis instead. His teachers told him, “Patrick! Do your homework or you won’t learn a thing.” And it’s true. Sometimes he did feel like a fool. But what could he do He hated homework.
Then one day he found his cat playing with a little toy and he grabbed it away. To his surprise it wasn’t a toy at all, but a man of the tiniest size. He had a little wool shirt and a high tall hat much like a witch’s (女巫). He shouted, “Save me! Don’t give me back to that cat. I’ll promise you a wish. I promise you that.”
Patrick couldn’t believe how lucky he was! Here was the answer to all of his problems. So he said, “Only if you do all my homework till the end of the term, that’s 35 days. If you do a good enough job, I could even get A’s.”
And true to his word, that little elf (精灵) began to do Patrick’s homework. Except there was one small problem. The elf didn’t always know what to do and he needed help. “Help me! Help me!" he’d say. And Patrick would have to help — in whatever way.
“I don’t know this word,” the elf cried while reading Patrick’s homework. “Get me a dictionary. No, what’s even better, look up the word and sound it out by each letter.”
When it came to maths, Patrick was out of luck. “What are times tables " the elf screamed. “We elves never need that. And addition and subtraction and division and fractions Here, sit down beside me, you simply must guide me.” Elves know nothing of human history. To them it’s a mystery (秘密). So the little elf, already a shouter, just got louder. “Go to the library, I need books. More and more books. And you can help me read them too.”
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As a matter of fact, every day in every way that little elf was a nag (喋喋不休的人)!
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Patrick got his A’s.
△Coherence: Is it acceptable
As a matter of fact, every day in every way that little elf was a nag!
1) The elf asked one question after another and he did know nothing about human history, math or English.
2) It seemed like hundreds of bees making noises around Patrick.
3) After they arrived home from library, the little elf was blurry with tears and pointed at the books.
4) With the endless urge of the little elf, Patrick had to stay in the library and read books for the elf all day long.
5) Patrick became angry. One day, Patrick couldn’t bear any more, shouting to the elf and walking away …
6) When it came to Patrick’s homework, the little elf would become a shouter, asking Patrick to spell out every word and reading history book emotionally. … Patrick would sit beside the elf, reading books and even discussing together …
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1) Finally, it was time for the final exam. Patrick was nervously waiting for the result.
2) One day, Patrick found there was a comment on his homework, A!
3) That hardworking elf did a good job, which made Patrick’s teacher extremely satisfied and praised him.
4) With the help of the elf, Patrick finished the homework on time and handed it in.
Patrick got his As.
1) The elf completed his promise and left.
2) His friends were surprised. The teacher praised his progress and called on the whole class to learn from him. Patrick became the model in his class.
△Hidden evidence: Is it acceptable
Hearing this, a satisfied smile flashed across the little elf’s face. The elf said, “To be honest, I can finish your homework on my own, but the A’s you earned by yourself was more meaningful than the one I gave you.”
Possible version 1:
As a matter of fact, every day in every way that little elf was a nag! Tired as he was, Patrick couldn’t get rid of the little elf, for the elf had made a promise, which was unbreakable due to elves’ rules. As a result, Patrick had to learn a lot, from math, English, history to physics, to help the elf finish his own homework. Once in a while, the elf could complain about how hard the homework was. However, time ticking by, Patrick learned much knowledge, which he should have learned but never did. Eventually, his homework was finished and handed in to the teacher.
Patrick got his As. Never could he imagine that such thing would happen. He pinched his hand hard, only to find he wasn’t dreaming. It was the first time that he had caught a feeling of pride in his homework. What’s more, he found that he didn’t hate homework so much as he used to. He hurried home, telling the elf the good news. Eyes sparkling with excitement, the elf congratulated on his success. That was when Patrick realized that it was not the elf’s assistance, but his hard work that contributed his As.
Possible version 2:
As a matter of fact, every day in every way that little elf was a nag! To get rid of the disturbing noise that the little elf had made, Patrick had no alternative but to satisfy the elf’s need. He had to borrow tons of books from the library and read them to the elf. To explain the problems that the little elf met in science, Patrick searched for relevant information online for the first time. Since the elf had no taste in art, Patrick was required to draw a picture to show what it should be like on earth. The end of the term drew near, and Patrick was so occupied in assisting the elf that he didn’t have any spare time to play. Then came the final day, Patrick waited for the scores anxiously.
Patrick got his As. Nevertheless, many students were just wondering if Patrick cheated in his homework. What astonished Patrick and his classmates was that Patrick did well in the following tests. When Patrick went home, the little elf appeared again and he congratulated with a smile. It dawned on Patrick that he had gained and improved a lot during the time. From then on, Patrick devoted himself to studying harder. What’s more, the elf also left him a hidden treasure, which served as a reminder that he could learn well through his hard work and determination.
Possible version 3(黎*)
As a matter of fact, every day in every way that little elf was a nag! It seemed like hundreds of bees making noises around Patrick, asking him “how to do this ” or “What does that mean ”. Annoyed but still patient, he had no alternative but to meet the elf’s endless requirements and it rekindled his strong determination to earn As. Every day, Patrick did a lot, renting history books from library, searching relevant knowledge on math and spelling words one by one. The classmates around him were surprised by his sudden change. The day of receiving the final grade report came. With pulse raising, Patrick got the report from his teacher, taking a deep breath and opening it.
Patrick got his As. His excitement of obtaining his valuable As soon overtook the nervousness he’d had before. On arriving home, he told the good news to the elf, saying, “I got my first As. Thank you so much for helping me!” Feeling a ton lighter and glowing with pride, the elf beamed, “The efforts you devoted to it accounts for the great marks.” Lost in the bliss, Patrick recalled the unbelievable 35 days and realized what seemed to be boring was not doing the homework but not knowing how to do it well. With the magical experience, he had a taste of the sweet of learning and determined to strive for the next As.
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As a matter of fact, every day in every way that little elf was a nag! With the endless urge of the little elf, Patrick had to stay in the library and read books of different subjects all day long. Bit by bit, Patrick found that he could understand the textbook. Sometimes, he could even answer the questions the moment he read the questions. What the elf needed to do was only to write down the answer on the homework. As time went by, the final exam was around the corner. (徐佳*)
As a matter of fact, every day in every way that little elf was a nag! Patrick had no choice but to satisfy the little elf’s demand. There were piles of books waiting for him every day. (孔羽*)
As a matter of fact, every day in every way that little elf was a nag! Patrick had no choice but to meet the elf’s requirements, from borrowing books from the library to spelling out words for the elf. (林东*)
… Every time the elf became confused, the unstoppable crying “Help! Read the book to me!” echoed and lingered around Patrick’s room. In order to get As, Patrick had no choice but to assist the elf with his homework. (谢梓*)
… Every time Patrick was about to go out to play or to take a nap, the endless shout from the elf would sound like a strong hand, pulling Patrick back to the chair at the desk. (李俊*)
Because of the elf, Patrick spent most of the time reading in the library, although sometimes he was sad for he couldn’t play basketball or football. (陈韵*)
Having read more books, Patrick was surprised to find himself different. Sometimes, although he didn’t open the book, he could answer the question from the elf. (黄漪*)
Gradually, he became more familiar with all the subjects. With the help of the elf, Patrick finished the homework on time and handed it in.(吴湘*)
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Patrick got his As. A flush of excitement swept over the boy. So joyful was he that he rushed home to share the good news with the little elf. (黄杏*)
Patrick got his As. Feeling excited, Patrick rushed home after school, sharing the good news to the elf. (陈骏*)
Patrick got his As. The moment Patrick got the news, so astonished was he that he became tongue-tied, “Re…Really ” It was certainly real as his parents, teachers and classmates have witnessed his hard work and perseverance during the past 35 days. (徐佳*)
Patrick got his As. Seeing the tower-shaped letter on the paper, Patrick almost sprang to his feet. (张誉*)
No sooner had Patrick arrived home than he thanked elf sincerely, showing elf his shining “A”. … Undoubtedly, when Patrick answered the elf’s questions, he actually learned a thing. (邝骏*)
… On arriving home, Patrick couldn’t wait to let out a scream, “I got an A!” Without any response, the home was quiet and nowhere could he find the elf. It hit him that everything may be like a tale, but the progress was real. From then on, Patrick studied harder and went on getting more As.(黄凯*)
… After class, he rushed home, only to find that the elf disappeared. (蒲*)
Patrick thanked the elf, “Had it not been for your help, I wouldn’t have got the As.”. Standing on the books, the elf replied, “It was your hard work and the books that made the As.” … Recalling the past 35 days they spent reading and learning, Patrick gave elf a grin, promising, “Of course I will. I won’t let you down.”（孔羽*）
The elf smiled and explained, “Actually, it was you that finished your homework. I just helped you write it down. You can get As on your own!” Patrick’s face lit up, “Really ” “We elves never lie!”, replied the little nag. (李俊*)
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