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1．电脑作为最伟大的发明物之一，在我们的学习和生活中发挥着至关重要的作用，但如果沉迷于电脑游戏，也会给我们青少年带来极大的危害。请以Computer—the most important invention 为题写一篇短文，谈谈你对于电脑的看法。
要求：1. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。
3. 词数不少于60个词。
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2．回顾初中三年，你在学习、生活等方面取得了优异的成绩，这些成绩的背后离不开老师的辛勤教诲，家长的次次鼓励，还有……，你很感谢他们。你校英语报“Have you say”栏目正向即将毕业的你们征集感恩主题的征文。假设你叫刘奇，请以Say “thanks” to _______为题，并结合具体事例，写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。
提示： 1.Introduce the person you want to thank.(appearance, personality…)
2.Explain the reason why you want to thank her/him. 3.Express the way you want to thank her/him.
Say “thanks” to _______
Looking back on the past three years, I’d like to say “thanks” to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．国无精神不立，人无精神不强。北京冬奥会结束了，但奥运精神绝不会止于赛场，体育精神也会在现实生活中给予我们力量。请以“The sports spirit inspired me”为题， 描述在生活或学习中运动精神激励你拼搏坚持的一次经历，并谈谈你的感悟和收获。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不能出现作者本人的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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4．当前我国政府正致力于建设“节约型”社会，倡导节约，抵制浪费。作为学生我们也能做些力所能及的事情，如步行或骑自行车上学；随手关水、断电；减少物品的使用和废旧物品的回收、再利用等。请根据要求和提示完成主题为How to Save的海报，号召更多的人，加入“节约”的行动中来。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：1. 80词左右 2.文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
提示：tap(水龙头)，uneaten food／leftovers(剩余饭菜)
How to Save
Our government is aiming to build an "economized society" .I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.____________________________ _______________________
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In a word, I think, one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
5．请根据下列提示，以“The person I admire most”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
As time goes by, many excellent persons have devoted themselves to the whole world in many different ways. You are always moved by their spirits and their contribution. Please write about a great person you admire most. Try to tell us who he/she is, what he/she did for us, why you admire him/her so much.
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3.词数不少于100。
The person I admire most
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6．某英文报举办以“家庭巨变”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下表提示，以“Changes in my family”为题，写一篇征文稿介绍你家二十年来的变化。
二十年前 现在
房子 小而旧 又大又新
通讯方式 写信 使用电话或手机(cellphone)
交通方式 步行或骑自行车 开私家车(family car)
生活 贫穷但安宁 富裕但忙碌
要求：1.根据表格内容进行写作，可适当发挥；
2.灵活运用本单元所学的used to结构；
3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes in my family
Great changes have taken place in my family over the past twenty years.
7．如今，很多父母望子成龙心切，给孩子安排很多任务，导致孩子没有了自己的周末，如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法，以“Weekend or Not ”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。
注意: 文中不得出现“Jack”以外的人名或任何学校名称。
Weekend or Not
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8．为丰富学生的课外生活，某校学生会决定设立课外活动社团。为此，他们在校内随机调查了100人，以了解同学们对课外活动的偏好，下面是调查结果，其中，喜欢做运动的人数是46人，喜欢读书的人数是33人。
请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容，第二段从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的课外活动并阐述原因。
要求：1.词数不少于80；2.开头已给出不计入词数；3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
A school did a survey among 100 students about their favorite after-school activities. Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．在动物园里，你遇见了一个外国老爷爷，他想去看熊猫，根据图示，请你为他指出去熊猫馆的路，文中不得出现真实姓名，校名，地名，词数30词左右。
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10．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike不久就要到中国来，他写信询问你在中国如何让自己的举止得体，请你给Mike写一封回信，给出一些合理的建议。
要求：80-100词，字迹工整，内容合理，语法正确，句子连贯，符合逻辑，文中不要出现具体的姓名、学校等信息。
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11．假如你是李华，最近看了一场电影，请你用英语给好朋友写一封信，介绍一下这次观影感受。
内容提示：
●What film did you see
●What feeling do you have Why
注意：1.词数80-100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.不要写出真实姓名和校名。
Dear ________,
I have seen a film recently. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文：
Computer—the most important invention
The computer is one of the most important inventions in our modern world. The invention of the computer has changed people’s life. It makes things much easier in many ways. With the help of the computer, we can chat with others at any time and at any place. We can read books and learn more information. We can watch movies and download lots of things. But there are always two sides in one thing. Many students are too addicted to it, they spend so much time on computer games that they can’t finish their homework on time, and some even make friends on the Internet. It is not safe for students. We should use the computer correctly and safely.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求就电脑在我们日常学习和生活中的使用，谈谈学生使用电脑的利弊。
2.写作指导：本文用一般现在时写作。文章应分层次阐述：电脑在学习和生活中重要的作用，再阐述学生过多或错误使用电脑的不利。书写时要注意句子结构清晰，正确使用短语。
2．范文：
Say “thanks” to my English teacher!
Looking back on the past three years, I’d like to say “thank you” to my English teacher. She is tall and slim. She is humorous and popular among us. She’s kind and patient too.
I would like to thank her for her help with my English. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English, so I was often silent and said nothing in class. Once I did badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, she had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class. Since then, I have worked hard and made great progress.
I feel lucky to be her student. I will work even harder to make myself better. I will let her feel proud of me.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时注意要承接短文开头，根据英语提示的内容，叙述你想感谢的人是你的英语老师，描述她的外表和个性等；接下来叙述你想感谢她的原因；最后表达你想感谢她的方式。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容叙述完整，条理清晰。
3．例文：
The sports spirit inspired me
The 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics was over, but its sports spirit was never gone, it would always inspire me.
I am not good at math, so I don’t like it. But you know I must learn it well. To get a good grade in math, I have to work out 10 math problems. One day, when I worked on the fourth problom, I couldn’t find out how to solve it, although I tried again and again. I was so upset that I would give up. At that time, I thought of Wu Dajing, Ren Ziwei..., I know I couldn’t give up, I must keep on, I must work hard for my dream. At last, I succeeded.
The spirit is important for a person and a country. Let’s spread our sports spirit together.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“运动精神鼓舞我”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括谈论自己在生活或学习中一次经历，经历的内容是受到体育精神的鼓舞，并谈谈感悟和收获。即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。
写作指导：本文写作应该使用第一人称。时态应根据情境主要运用一般现在时和一般过去时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分开门见山，引出体育精神鼓舞着自己；第二部分根据要求展开，描述自己受到体育精神鼓舞的经历，要具体，要扣题；第三部分总结全文，表达感受，感情升华，阐述精神的重要性。
4．How to Save
Our government is aiming to build an "economized society ". I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal. As students, we can still do something to help.
First, don't waste things. We'd better go to school on foot or ride a bike instead of taking a car. Turn off the lights as soon as we leave the classroom. Remember to turn off the tap at once after washing our hands. When we go out to eat in a restaurant, ask for smaller dishes and take leftover home. Before we buy something new, think whether it is necessary.
Next, use things for as long as possible. When we buy things, make sure that they last along time. Don't use a paper cup or a paper bag. It's better to use a china cup and a lunch box because you can use them again.
Finally, collect what can be recycled in your classroom or in your neighborhood and sell them. We should also buy things made from recycled materials.
In a word, I think ,one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们写一个名为How to Save的海报，介绍一下作为学生，我们应该怎么做，来支持我们国家建设“节约型”社会的目标，号召更多的同学们都加入“节约”的行动中来。这是一篇话题作文，题目中并没有给出具体的写作内容，只规定了文章的主题，具体写什么，需要学生自己发挥想象力，结合自己的日常生活和体会，补充短文的内容，这是这篇文章的一个写作难点。另外还应注意英语表达和汉语习惯上的不同，写作时，应从句子的整体考虑，确定所需句型和词汇，语法规范，用词准确。另外还需要注意句子之间的连接成分，使上下文的意思连贯。使用一些平时积累的好的词汇、短语和句型，使文章表达流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整符合题目要求。短文中根据题目要求介绍了作为学生我们应如此从日常生活中的一些小事做起，倡导节俭，抵制浪费。内容充实，叙述有条理，短文中使用了First, Next, Finally这样的单词，文章的结构非常清晰，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短文中句式的表达符合英语的表达要求，语法规范，句子精炼，句式、词汇使用准确。短文中使用了简单句和复合句交替，很好的控制了文章的节奏。其中较好的句型有I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal、We'd better go to school on foot or ride a bike instead of taking a car. Turn off the lights as soon as we leave the classroom.、When we go out to eat in a restaurant, ask for smaller dishes and take leftover home.、It's better to use a china cup and a lunch box because you can use them again、In a word, I think ,one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference等。
5．例文
The person I admire most
Nowadays, many teenagers are crazy about young idols, and they support their idols with all their hearts. They are attracted by the beautiful faces, the dance and singing skills. But for me, the person l admire the most is my father. He is always the hero in my heart.
My father is a typical father. He does not say much, but he never does less for me. My father never misses the important moment for me. When school needs parents to present at the meeting, no matter how busy he is, my father will always be one of the members. When other students are complaining about their fathers, I feel so lucky to get enough care from him.
My father has a strong personality, which influences me greatly. He is never late for work. It tells me that I should finish my own job first. Thanks to him, I keep a good habit of study.
My father is a great person for me, who sets a good example and influences me all the time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是一篇材料作文，要求以“The person I admire most”为题谈谈你最敬佩的人，他/她都做了些什么以及为什么这么敬佩他/她。注意要点齐全。
2. 写作指导：本文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来描述。第一段先点题；第二段详细具体地写清楚他/她做了什么以及敬佩他/她的原因，写作中可以选用合适的连词，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
6．Great changes have taken place in my family over the past twenty years. In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small.
People communicate with each other by writing letters.They used to ride a bike or walk to work.But they felt happy and easy at that time.
Now people live in new and big houses.They can talk on the cellphone.They can drive family car to other places they like.Their life is rich and busy.But they don’t feel tired.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以Changes in my family为题目，写一篇短文介绍自己家里这二十年来发生的变化。题目中利用表格的形式，罗列了需要介绍的一些内容，可以从以下几个方面进行介绍，如房子、通讯方式、交通方式以及生活上等。短文主要内容是过去的生活和现在的生活第一个对比，因此要注意文章中使用正确的时态，表述过去的情况时，应使用一般过去时态，动词变成过去式；说现在的时候，应使用一般现在时态，动词用原形，并根据题目要求灵活运用本单元所学的used to 结构。写作时，要合理安排写作内容，使文章有条理、有层次。注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，正确使用名词、动词、介词等。句子之间使用一些连词，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己家里这二十年来发生的变化。首先，短文内容完整，包括了题目要求的所有信息，表述有条理，层次清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章中一般过去时态和一般现在时态交替使用，动词形式变化准确，语法规范，used to这一结构使用也很准确。短文中使用了一些较好的句式，如People communicate with each other by writing letters. They used to ride a bike or walk to work. But they felt happy and easy at that time、Their life is rich and busy. But they don’t feel tired.等。
7．例文
Weekend or Not
Jack has to attend lots of classes at weekends. He has little time for his favorite sport—soccer. Still, his parents are pushing him to do more tasks, which worries him a lot.
Nowadays, many students are under much pressure like Jack. Their parents believe it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible. As a result, some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything. What’s worse, they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.
I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Weekend or Not”为题根据图片所示内容进行写作，分析图中的现象并谈谈自己的想法，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和一般现在时为主。第一段描述图片中的现象；第二段主要讲述自己对这种现象的看法；第三段进行总结。写作时需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰；同时，注意合理拓展，逻辑顺畅。
8．例文
A school did a survey among 100 students about their favorite after-school activities. Here are the results. Forty-six students like playing sports. Thirty-three students like reading. And only twenty-one students like watching movies.
As for me, I like reading best because I can learn a lot of knowledge by reading different books. There are a variety of books for us to choose . One of my favorite books is Gone With The Wind, from which I learn a lot. For example, I have learned how to live independently. I believe that all of us can benefit a lot from reading.
【详解】题干解读：这是一篇看图作文。短文内容包含两部分：首先用百分比简要说明图表内容，然后从图表中选出一项自己喜欢的课外活动并说明原因。
写作指导：这篇短文应该使用一般现在时态。人称主要用第一人称和第三人称。第二段介绍自己喜欢的课外活动时重点放在阐述原因上，注意要用词准确，条理清晰。
9．例文
You can walk along the Main Street and turn right at the East Road. You can see a shop on your left. The Panda House is behind the shop. You won’t miss it.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片内容，介绍去熊猫馆的路。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要介绍清楚图片中的路线，可使用祈使句指路。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．例文：
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear the information that you will come to China. Chinese people are very friendly, so please take it easy. Here are some suggestions for good manners in China.
First, respect everyone. If you respect others, you will get respect from others. Second, be willing to help others. When you see others need help, you shouldn’t be afraid of trouble or losses. Reach out your hand in time. It is easier to leave a good impression on others by giving help in time of need. Third, use polite language. When communicating with others, “please” and “thank you” will make you welcome.
I wish you a happy time in China!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作提示，给好朋友Mike提出一些让他在中国举止得体的合理建议。注意书信格式，行文要条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。在中国举止得体的建议如下；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从尊重他人，乐于助人和使用礼貌用语三个方面进行阐述；
第三步，书写结语。祝福朋友在中国度过快乐的时光。
[亮点词汇]
①take it easy别担心
②be afraid of害怕
③leave a good impression给人留下好印象
[高分句型]
①If you respect others, you will get respect from others.（“if”引导条件状语从句）
②When you see others need help, you shouldn’t be afraid of trouble or losses.（“when”引导时间状语从句）
11．例文
Dear Tom,
I have seen a film recently. It is called Kung Fu Panda.
This movie tells us how an ordinary panda became a real dragon warrior. At first, the Master Shifu didn’t believe panda could become the brave dragon warrior. Through panda’s persistent efforts, he has won Master Shifu’s approval. Shifu follows tortoise’s instructions and tries to turn panda into a real warrior. Finally, the pandas successfully defeated their biggest enemy, the tiger.
I like this movie very much, and it makes me feel very excited. Because this movie tells us such a truth: as long as we keep on working hard, any difficulty can be overcome.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信文。根据内容提示写一封信给自己的好朋友，介绍最近看电影的感受。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时可适当发挥，围绕主题，注意单词语法的正确性，逻辑要清晰。
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