课时把关练
Part IV Writing
妙笔生花——应用文
假定你是某校高二学生李华,你校将举办城市环保宣传活动,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 垃圾的现状;
2. 造成的危害;
3. 提出建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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步骤一:审题构思——分析透彻很关键
一、审题
1. 确定体裁:本次写作要求写一篇演讲稿,内容涉及环境保护的重要性;
2. 确定人称:本文要用第一、三人称;
3. 确定时态:时态以一般现在时为主。
二、构思
首先:提出现象(河里有大量的垃圾);
其次:造成的危害(河水受到污染,对人们的健康有害,污染环境等);
最后:提出建议。
步骤二:精挑细选——核心词汇想周全
1. __________________________发表演讲
2. __________________________代表
3. __________________________导致
4. __________________________对……有害
5. __________________________只要
6. __________________________对……做出贡献
步骤三:遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现
1. 我将在这里代表我的班级发表演讲。(主谓宾状)
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2. 每天我们都能看到河里漂浮着许多垃圾。(主谓宾宾补)
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3. 这些垃圾导致河水变脏。(主谓宾)
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4. 它对我们的健康有害。(主系表)
________________________________________________________________________________5. 我们可以为保护环境做出贡献。(主谓宾)
________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 我们可以创造美丽的环境。(主谓宾)
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步骤四:斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点
1. 把第1句升级为it作形式宾语的句子
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2. 把第2句升级为被动语态
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3. 用“There is no doubt...”结构丰富第3句
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4. 把丰富后的第3句和第4句升级为定语从句
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5. 把第5、6句升级为as long as引导的条件句
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步骤五:连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇
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课时把关练
Part IV Writing
参考答案
步骤二
1. make a speech 2. on behalf of 3. result in 4. be harmful to 5. as long as
6. make a contribution to
步骤三
1. I will make a speech here on behalf of my class.
2. We can see lots of rubbish floating on the river every day.
3.The rubbish results in the dirty water in the river.
4. It is harmful to our health.
5. We can make a contribution to protecting the environment.
6.We can create a beautiful environment.
步骤四
1. I feel it an honour to make a speech here on behalf of my class.
2. Lots of rubbish can be seen floating on the river every day.
3. There is no doubt that the rubbish results in the dirty water in the river.
4. There is no doubt that the rubbish results in the dirty water in the river,which is harmful to our health.
5. As long as we can make a contribution to protecting the environment,we can create a beautiful environment.
步骤五
Dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. I feel it an honour to make a speech here on behalf of my class.
Almost every day lots of rubbish such as plastic bags,leftover food,fruit peels can be seen floating on the river behind our school. There is no doubt that the rubbish results in the dirty water in the river,which is harmful to our health. Besides,it also pollutes our surroundings.
In my view,as long as we can behave ourselves and make a contribution to protecting the environment,we can create a beautiful environment.
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