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冀教版 英语七年级上册 Unit 4 Food and Restaurants 写作 专练
1．以下是本单元所学的重点词汇，请你发挥想象，用它们编写一篇不少于30词的小短文，体裁不限。
good, habit, for, eat, have, breakfast, lunch, dinner
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2．假如你是Xu Lin, 你的加拿大笔友Jimmy想了解你的兴趣和生活喜好，请根据下图，从3个方面进行介绍。
要求：1、开头已写好，只需接着写。
2、内容完整，可以适当进行补充。
3、字数60词左右。
3．Write a passage of at least 40 words on the topic “My delicious dinner tonight”（以“我今晚美味的晚饭”为题写一篇短文, 词数不少于40个）
The following questions are for reference（以下问题仅供参考）
1. What would you like for dinner tonight
2. Would you like…or…
3. What kind of soup would you like
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4．Write at least 60 words about the topic "My favourite Food".（以“我最喜欢的食物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions： 1.What would you like to eat every day 2. Is it your favourite food 3.Why do you love it
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5．假如你是Eric，一个六年级的男生，请以“My Parents and I”为题，来介绍你的父母和自己的情况，内容可适当发挥，要包含一日三餐饮食习惯和运动爱好等。
要求：表达准确，行文连贯。不出现真实的个人信息。不少于60词。
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6．假如你是康康。你的英国朋友迈克(Mike)非常喜欢中国美食，他写信给你，想要你介绍一下中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜。请根据要求给他写一封回信。
要求：1.字迹工整，语句通顺；
2. 80 词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Chinese food; different from; breakfast; lunch; dinner
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Kangkang
7．假如你们社区新开了一家餐馆，请你为这家餐馆的食品、价格等内容做一个简介，让大家更了解餐馆的特色。不少于60词。
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参考答案：
1．例文
My brother wants to be healthy. He has a good eating habit. He has some bread, an egg and milk for breakfast. He often has some rice, fish or meat for lunch. He has some vegetables and fruit for dinner. So he is very healthy.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干中所给词的提示词汇编一个小短文，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。文章主要根据提示词汇介绍自己哥哥的健康饮食习惯，写作时注意语言的准确性，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
2．Dear Jimmy:
How is it going now Now let me tell you something about me. I like vegetables and chicken .I think they’re healthy food. I don’t like hamburgers or ice-cream. I don’t want to be fat. My favorite sport is soccer, because it’s fun and relaxing. I don’t like volleyball. I think it’s difficult. I only watch it on TV. I have a clothes store. It sells socks in all colors. They ‘re at very good prices. You can come and buy.
Yours
XuLin
【详解】试题解析：
这是一篇材料作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求。写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥。本文时态主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态及主谓一致问题。
【亮点说明】文章主要写作者的兴趣和爱好，要点全部都写出，并且增加了一些内容使文章更通顺，更符合要求。文中使用很多句子，让文章更加出彩，如 How is it going now I don’t want to be fat.等。
3．范文：
Our family always has a delicious dinner. Tonight I would like rice for dinner. I would like steamed prawns with garlic. I would also like some soup. I would like tomato and egg soup. After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit. I'd like to have some strawberries because eating some strawberries is good for my health. I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful!
【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求写美味的晚饭，属于记叙文写作。短文开篇先点明每天都有美味的晚餐Our family always has a delicious dinner；然后描述对今晚晚餐的设想；最后表达期待I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful。
2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分总”结构，用第一人称叙述，时态是一般将来时；内容充实，描述细致，想象合理，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：a delicious dinner, would like, for dinner, steamed prawns, have dinner, would like to do, be good for, be sure.
高分句型：
1). After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit.（时间状语从句）
2). I'd like to have some strawberries because eating some strawberries is good for my health.（原因状语从句）
3). I'm sure my dinner tonight will be so wonderful!（宾语从句）
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文中使用了After we have dinner, I would like to have some fruit.时间状语从句等多种从句结构。
4．例文
My favourite food
I eat fruit every day. And fruit is my favourite food. It is delicious and it is good for our health. And it has many kinds, such as apples, pears, oranges, lemons and so on. I can eat what I'd like every day. When I eat fruit, I feel very happy. Just as a saying goes. "An apple a day keeps a doctor away. " Of all the fruit, I like apples best. Fruit is so pretty and cute. I like fruit best.
【详解】1.题干解读：题文要求以“我最喜欢的食物”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，依据提示，应写出每天最想吃什么食物；它是你最喜欢的食物吗；你为什么喜欢它。
2.例文点评：动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。。
3.高分亮点：
短语：my favourite food；be good for；keeps … away；like…best。
句型：I can eat what I'd like every day.；When I eat fruit, I feel very happy.when引导的时间状语从句；I like fruit best.
5．例文：
My Parents and I
My name is Eric. I am in Grade Six. There are three people in my family. My parents and I. We often have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch, my mother likes rice with vegetables and some meat. My father always has noodles or dumplings. I often eat sandwiches. We have porridge and some fruit for dinner. My mother likes swimming. She can swim very well. My father likes running. He runs every day. I often play basketball with my friends. We all like sports.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以六年级男生Eric的身份介绍家人一日三餐饮食习惯和运动爱好，题目为“My Parents and I”。
2.写作指导：本文用一般现在时、第一人称写作，陈述父/母的习惯和爱好用单三形式。书写时要紧扣主题，分层叙述家人和自己一日三餐饮食习惯和运动爱好。书写时要注意单词的拼写和短语的使用，文句表达力求语法准确、逻辑清楚。
6．例文：
Dear Mike,
I am very glad to get your letter. You ask me about Chinese food. Now, I will tell you something about it. Of course, Chinese food is different from English food. We think breakfast is very important. For breakfast, we have porridge and eggs. Sometimes we have some noodles. For lunch, we usually have a bowl of rice, and some good dishes such as mapo tofu, gongbao chicken and so on. After lunch, we may drink some water or tea. For dinner, besides rice, we often eat some dumplings. Sometimes we have noodles, too. I like dumplings with mutton best. Would you like to have a try Welcome to China.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Kangkang
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇书面表达是一篇书信作文。要求我们作为康康，给英国朋友迈克(Mike)写一封回信，来介绍一下中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；要求包含题干中的要点，需要提到中国的一些饮食习惯和一些特色菜；写作时需要用到题干所给出的参考词汇，适当扩充句子；注意符合英语语法规范，逻辑清晰，条理清楚。
7．例文：
Would you like to eat noodles Come and eat in our noodles restaurant. We have different kinds of noodles, such as tomato and egg noodles, beef noodles, mutton noodles, chicken noodles and so on. There are 3 sizes—large, medium and small. The large one is 8 yuan, the medium 7 yuan and the small 6 yuan. Every day we have a special. If you order the large special, you will get a bowl of vegetable soup for free.
Come and have a try. You will love here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为广告；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：中心思想已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明广告目的：吸引人来光顾餐馆；
第二步，对新餐馆的食品等进行详细介绍；
第三步，呼吁大家来品尝或就餐。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②and so on等等
[高分句型]
①If you order the large special, you will get a bowl of vegetable soup for free.（状语从句：由if引导条件状语从句）
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