卷子答案网-一个不只有答案的网站上海松江区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-作文
一、话题作文
1．（2020·上海松江·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My gains”. （疫情期间，我们足不出户，但是我们看到听到了很多感人事迹，我们也经历了一段不同寻常的学习生活。无论是无私奉献的白衣天使或社区志愿者还是我们自己的生活经历都给我们带来了不同的感悟和收获。请结合这些感人事迹或自身经历，完成一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
The following expressions are just for reference:
online learning moving
medical workers impressive
community volunteers warm-hearted
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2．（2021·上海松江·统考二模）意大利爷爷Paterno的励志故事使他成为很多青少年的偶像。相信在生活学习中你也有一位想效仿或追随的榜样。请以“A model I want to follow”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文， 标点符号不占格。
注意∶
1. 短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022·上海松江·统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的倡议书，标点符号不占格)
在疫情防控的特殊时期，人们自觉落实各项防疫举措，居家工作、学习和生活成为阻隔病毒传染的有效方法之一。请你以学校学生会的名义，给全体学生写一封倡议书，使大家明白疫情期间在线学习和规律生活的重要性，并给出合理可行的建议，号召全校学生遵守执行，为防疫工作贡献自己的力量。
Some phrases for reference:
call on (号召); during COVID; study online / have online lessons
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息
2. 不得照搬阅读语篇内容。
Dear schoolmates
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
From
The Students’ Union
试卷第2页，共2页
试卷第1页，共2页
参考答案：
1．例文：
We Chinese students have to take online courses at home because of the virus. There is no denying that every student has his own impressive experience. As for me, I firmly believe that it makes me more knowledgeable and self-disciplined. During this period,teachers arranged our time well enough to make every student study more efficiently at home. I also took full use of my leisure time to learn my poor subject---Maths. When I was in trouble, I also used QQ or WeChat to ask my teachers for help and they could help me instantly. However, sometimes my self-control was not enough, so my parents always remind me that I must spend more time studying at home so that I could be admitted into an ideal high school. After a certain time, I am able to take full advantage of my time flexibly. Therefore, online learning improves my ability of getting knowledge and controlling myself.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述一段不同寻常的学习生活经历或是他人的事迹。
2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般过去时态来写作，讲述我的学习经历叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：take online courses；because of；as for；took full use of；be in trouble; take full advantage of; online learning。
句型：There is no denying that…句型；that引导的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句。
2．例文
A model I want to follow
Mr. Paterno is a model I want to follow. He never gives up when meeting with difficulties. As the first child of a very poor family, he was forced to work when he was very young in order to support his family. He must have met with a lot of troubles but he remained strong. When he was retired, he didn’t give up his interest of study. He took up learning and graduated from the university in his nineties. As an old man, he must have worse memory and less energy than young people, but he still managed to overcome the difficulties and graduated with a degree in history. As a teenager, I will learn from Mr. Paterno and be persistent in study.
Wang Yibo is the model I want to follow. His polite and modest behavior in the TV program called “Day Day Up” has won a lot of fans. On the show, he always stands aside and keeps smiling instead of showing off. He takes every chance to learn from others, which makes him improve quickly these years. What’s more, his persistent attitude inspires me a lot. He has practiced dancing for ten years and has achieved great success in the show “This is street dancing”. Now he is still working hard to make progress. He is a super star and I want to be such a modest and persistent person like him.
I love my mom and admire her as well. She’s always my model. In my eyes, she’s like a superwoman. She is good at all kinds of housework. She makes our home clean and nice. She cooks delicious food for the whole family every day. She can even do some repair work that my dad can’t. Besides taking care of the family, she is also sales manager of a company. Though she is strict, people there all respect her very much. She is always busy but she never complains. I'm proud of my mom and she’s the model I want to follow in my life.
Jason, our monitor, is a good example I want to follow. He is a friendly guy with great humor who brings sunshine to everyone in his life. Wherever he appears, the place is always full of laughter and happiness. He is so optimistic that even when he fails in an exam, he never loses heart. He is a talented boy with modesty. He has won various kinds of national competitions. However, he never shows off or refuses to answer any “stupid” questions. It is his optimism and modesty that I admire most. I would like to learn from him.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时第一段应承接短文开头材料，主要写爷爷Paterno的励志故事使他成为我们很多人的榜样；根据第二、三、四段根据自己的经历来叙述那些对自己来说可以作为榜样的人，并在他们的身上看到了什么优点，自己该怎么去学习。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，用过去进行时描述场景；描述故事时，场景应描写细致，可以列举几个具体的实例进行说明；并且故事发生的背景、起因和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
3．例文：
Dear schoolmates,
During COVID, in order to effectively prevent the spread of the virus, our school decided to delay the opening time and adopt online teaching. Students should study online. At the same time, make sure you live a regular life. For everyone’s study and life, we call on you to do the following:
1. Attend class on time and finish online homework.
2. Take your temperature every day, and then report it to your teacher.
3. Wash your hands frequently and drink plenty of water.
4. Take more exercise.
5. Wear a mask when you go out and don’t gather.
From
The Students’ Union
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求写一封倡议书，告诫学生和老师疫情期间在线学习和规律生活的重要性，并给出合理的建议。注意要点齐全，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时来行文，提建议时应详细具体，可以采用祈使句等句型；内容要包含题目所给的提示内容，行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
答案第2页，共3页
答案第3页，共3页