卷子答案网-一个不只有答案的网站上海宝山区2021-2022年中考英语二模试题-作文
一、话题作文
1．（2021·上海宝山·统考二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic _________ made me a better person. (请以“……使我成为更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或某个人使我们发现了自己的潜力与天赋；使我们由依赖到独立，敢于选择、敢于承担责任；使我们勇于面对未知，尝试新经验，主动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历，谈一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己，你又在哪些方面做出了改变。
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二、材料作文
2．（2022·上海宝山·统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Sam在学校的英语学习论坛里发了一个帖子寻求帮助，请阅读他的帖子并针对他提出的问题写一份回帖为他提供帮助。
Sam, Posted: (2 days ago) My problem I’m very worried about the coming English oral test (口语测试) . I’m not good at speaking English. I’ve no idea about how to practice oral English. My parents are angry with me because I haven’t made much progress. What should I do Can you give me some advice
Your Reply
Re: Sam’s problem _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
注意:
1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
●be patient
●keep practising
●communicate with
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三、书信作文
3．（2022·上海宝山·统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华，你的朋友小强最近在学习时注意力难以集中，学习效果不佳，感觉压力很大。请你给他写一封信对他表示关心，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给他提供一些缓解学习压力的方法，帮助他放松身心、提高学习效率。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
under stress
take an active part in…
try to relax and enjoy…
Dear Xiao Qiang,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案：
1．范文：
Understanding other people makes me a better person
As is known to all, everyone is a special unity that has his own mind and story. When facing the similar circumstances, they may make different choices. Every decision we make and every action we do make us be a different person from others. So it is very important to understand others especially when we get along with other people.
First, understanding can avoid quarrels among people. If we put ourselves in other people’s shoes, we can understand others better. Second, understanding is also a self-cultivation. Everyone has their own difficulties, which means that we can’t impose our minds on other people.
I always remind myself of understanding others. I think that understanding other people makes me a better person.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时首先补全标题，然后根据汉语提示的内容，说明什么促使你成为更好的自己，在哪些方面做出了改变，并说明理由。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。
2．例文
Don’t lose heart. Confidence will solve many problems. There are some solutions to improve your oral English.
First of all, recite the words and be patient. Because the sentences read in English are composed of words, you will be more fluent when you are familiar with the words. Secondly, you should read after the radio and cultivate your sense of language. Keep practicing so that you can speak fluently. Finally, you should find more classmates to communicate with you in your classroom.
I hope above advice will be helpful to you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文需要回复Sam发布的一个帖子，回复原贴中的问题：应该如何提高口语？
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时；主要以第二人称为主展开叙述；短文采用三段式：第一段鼓励对方，引出话题。第二段给出具体的三个提高口语建议；最后一段总结全文。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。
3．例文
Dear Xiao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty concentrating on his study recently, the learning effect is poor, and you feel stressed. In fact, don’t worry, everyone will be under pressure. Proper pressure is helpful to do our study well. However, too much pressure is harmful to our health and study.
I was in the same situation as you. You can take an active part in sports. When you feel upset, you should try to relax and enjoy your favorite music. I believe that if you do this, you will get better and you will make a big progress in your study.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，给小强写一封信，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给出一些缓解学习压力的方法。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；在写作时要确保内容完整，要点全面，行文连贯，流畅、通顺，适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，和复合句。语言结构要符合语法习惯，保证单词拼写和标点使用正确。
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